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For some reason posts 457-475 have disappeared for me! On my monitor, Page 19 ends right after post 456! What happened?
If this can't be fixed, can someone please tell me what was discussed on those posts?
I think the overbrightening may have been intentional (deliberate creative choice). IIRC the use of high dynamic range lighting is fairly common through the film.
I guess it just feels brighter without the color tint.
Dr. M
For some reason posts 457-475 have disappeared for me! On my monitor, Page 19 ends right after post 456! What happened?
If this can't be fixed, can someone please tell me what was discussed on those posts?
Yup, I have exactly the same problem. Hopefully Jay can iron it out.
Laser, I was just watching your edit of the jungle chase and I have one other, minor suggestion. Is it at all possible to trim the duration between Mutt coming up to the front of the truck and then asking 'so, what's he gonna do next?' - there seems to be a strange lull in the momentum here, what with his pause/strange look before he asks that question. If his pause was trimmed, so that he quickly asks 'so, what's he gonna do next' almost immediately after he comes up to the front of the truck, it may seem less clumsy and more natural/convey a sense of excitement from Mutt, and get the action started sooner.
I initially thought that this pause signalled a dawning appreciation of Indy on Mutt's part, but he immediately responds 'don't call me son!' when Indy emerges a second later with the rocket launcher, and continues to remain sarcastic and aloof to Indy ('what are you looking at daddio?') throughout the majority of the rest of the chase (and we can really only identify Mutt's full acceptance of Indy as his father at the end of the film, anyway). So, we would really lose nothing by removing his pause, and may gain slightly better pacing in doing so.
Yeah, I thought about changing that moment as well. By the way, I always thought that look of Mutt was actually about seeing his mother "in action" for the first time, but it went on for too long. Since there's no cutaway from Mutt in that shot, I don't think it can be trimmed. I'll check, but don't hold your breath.
Ah, yeah, he is looking at Marion I suppose, so it could be him acknowledging his mother in action for the first time.
I can imagine it would be hard to trim this down, what with there not being a cut-away from Mutt, as you say. Would it be possible to somehow cut straight into him asking the question right after we see the shot of him sliding out of the truck-hatch? This would be opposed to trimming the look down; just cut it completely right into him asking the question. Or would that just not work at all?
By the way, I'm seriously digging your colour correction! It's looking really nice - not really finding it any 'brighter' than the original cut!
Ok so I'm learning Premiere more and more as we speak. I've been working on the sand/obelisk puzzle to make it seem more like Indy figures it out as opposed to stupid Ox. Anyway, its actually coming along nicely...well the video is at least.
1.) I am still completely lost when it comes to audio. How do you get separate tracks for the dialog and music?
2.) Also, lets say I wanted Indy to look over to one piece of the obelisk (lying horizontal) to size up the puzzle. The only shot of a piece in that position is when the pieces start rising. So my question is if I cut to a still of that piece (before it starts to rise) would it stand out completely? This is not required for this edit, just a question.
Thanks for the help.
List of propsed changes to Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/Kingdom-of-the-Crystal-Skull-Edit-Suggestions/topic/9732/
jones1899 said:Ok so I'm learning Premiere more and more as we speak. I've been working on the sand/obelisk puzzle to make it seem more like Indy figures it out as opposed to stupid Ox. Anyway, its actually coming along nicely...well the video is at least.
1.) I am still completely lost when it comes to audio. How do you get separate tracks for the dialog and music?
2.) Also, lets say I wanted Indy to look over to one piece of the obelisk (lying horizontal) to size up the puzzle. The only shot of a piece in that position is when the pieces start rising. So my question is if I cut to a still of that piece (before it starts to rise) would it stand out completely? This is not required for this edit, just a question.
Thanks for the help.
When ripping from the DVD the audio-track should come in form of an AC3-file, which is a 6-Channel-audio file. Premiere doesn't support AC3-files, so you have to use BeSweet to turn the AC3-file into 6 separate mono WAV-files. You can import them into Premiere and add them to 6 audio tracks (which have to be set to mono as well). Select all 6 audio tracks, right-click and choose "link" in the menu. Now these 6 tracks are linked together (duh!), and can be moved and trimmed like a single track.
Regarding the still frame: Yes, a still frame usually stands out, as even a still shot has some minimal camera-movement and even more than that moving film-grain. Of course, you can add some grain with a filter, which will break the giveaway of a still frame a little bit.
I don't know about the color correction. I kind of like the warm yellowish look. I guess that's just me.
Thanks Laser. I'll give it a shot.
Nice job again on the chase edit.
List of propsed changes to Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/Kingdom-of-the-Crystal-Skull-Edit-Suggestions/topic/9732/
Got A LOT done last night on the video edit, but for some reason my audio only came out as 2 tracks. Both of which I swear are the same damn thing. I am going to town on the video though. I think I found a new hobby.
I got rid of Ox's goofiness in the camp, Indy's head awkward head spasms after looking at the skull, some fridge bouncing, Indy saying fine don't wait for me in Boomtown, some cuts in the warehouse (not done there yet) and a few other things.
Heading to the quick sand scene next and cutting Indy being TOO friendly with Spalko in the camp.
Yeah its a well and good, but like I said this is all video and no audio. Still, good learning experience and the movie is better for it.
List of propsed changes to Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/Kingdom-of-the-Crystal-Skull-Edit-Suggestions/topic/9732/
jones1899 said:Got A LOT done last night on the video edit, but for some reason my audio only came out as 2 tracks. Both of which I swear are the same damn thing. I am going to town on the video though. I think I found a new hobby.
I got rid of Ox's goofiness in the camp, Indy's head awkward head spasms after looking at the skull, some fridge bouncing, Indy saying fine don't wait for me in Boomtown, some cuts in the warehouse (not done there yet) and a few other things.
Heading to the quick sand scene next and cutting Indy being TOO friendly with Spalko in the camp.
Yeah its a well and good, but like I said this is all video and no audio. Still, good learning experience and the movie is better for it.
Can you post some samples?
Ryan
Well, like I said - there's no audio. And of course I have no idea how to render out or post video clips. What can I say? I suck!!
As soon as I can figure out the audio track thing (why I only have 2 similar tracks) then I'll start posting some stuff. It's pretty fun to do, Heks, have you started messing with it at all?
List of propsed changes to Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/Kingdom-of-the-Crystal-Skull-Edit-Suggestions/topic/9732/
jones1899 said:Well, like I said - there's no audio. And of course I have no idea how to render out or post video clips. What can I say? I suck!!
As soon as I can figure out the audio track thing (why I only have 2 similar tracks) then I'll start posting some stuff. It's pretty fun to do, Heks, have you started messing with it at all?
No, I haven't done anything yet. I'm busy with a 3D modeling project till about the end of March. But I've started reading my Premiere book and after taking a week or two off at the start of April (I've been working 7 days per week since start of December) I'm gonna get going on this. Maybe we can compare notes then.
Ryan
cool sounds good. let me know.
List of propsed changes to Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/Kingdom-of-the-Crystal-Skull-Edit-Suggestions/topic/9732/
Video edit is comign along very nicely on my end. I did my own version of the waterfall sequence that I think works pretty well, I changed up the bit with Mac holding on to the whip in the end - that part always looked off to me. And I edited the quick sand bit, but the audio will do alot to help there as well. Let's see, what else... Oh! I was able to cut out Marion holding on to the steering wheel like an idiot after the waterfall. So glad to see that go. Still trying to fiugre out the magnetic gunpowder bit. To me its just more CGI that we don't need.
So now a couple of questions ...again.
1.) A major goal of mine is to use more familiar music from the OT in this film. Will it sound ok if I just pull those from my soundtrack CDs?
2.) What is the best program for color correction? I assume Premiere doesn't have that? Is there a free program that does color correction?
3.) I color correction a frame by frame job? Scene by scene? Or do you just adjust the entire movie at one time and then make tweaks here and there when needed?
4.) Let's say I wanted to borrow the edited version of the opening (without prairie dogs), if my version of the film was a different quality (not hd for example) would it be THAT noticable?
Thanks!
List of propsed changes to Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/Kingdom-of-the-Crystal-Skull-Edit-Suggestions/topic/9732/
jones1899 said:1.) A major goal of mine is to use more familiar music from the OT in this film. Will it sound ok if I just pull those from my soundtrack CDs?
2.) What is the best program for color correction? I assume Premiere doesn't have that? Is there a free program that does color correction?
3.) I color correction a frame by frame job? Scene by scene? Or do you just adjust the entire movie at one time and then make tweaks here and there when needed?
4.) Let's say I wanted to borrow the edited version of the opening (without prairie dogs), if my version of the film was a different quality (not hd for example) would it be THAT noticable?
Thanks!
1) That's how I did it, so yeah, that'll work.
2) Premiere does have all the color correction tools you might need, but to me using "adjustment layers" in AfterEffects is (just like in Photoshop) a lot easier. Or does Premiere have them? Not sure...
3) Usually color correction is a shot-by-shot process, to equalize the color in the different shots of the same scene. In this case though you can probably color-correct by complete scene, as the shots have already been equalized during the original editing of the film.
4) You mean the clip I've posted? If I remember correctly it's in HD, so you shouldn't have a problem using it in a DVD-size project, as long as you match the color to the rest of the scene (with the car driving off into the distance). Be sure to blur the material a bit though, as the DVD is a lot softer than a downscaled HD-image.
topdawg193 said:Laser, I was just watching your edit of the jungle chase and I have one other, minor suggestion. Is it at all possible to trim the duration between Mutt coming up to the front of the truck and then asking 'so, what's he gonna do next?' - there seems to be a strange lull in the momentum here, what with his pause/strange look before he asks that question. If his pause was trimmed, so that he quickly asks 'so, what's he gonna do next' almost immediately after he comes up to the front of the truck, it may seem less clumsy and more natural/convey a sense of excitement from Mutt, and get the action started sooner.
I initially thought that this pause signalled a dawning appreciation of Indy on Mutt's part, but he immediately responds 'don't call me son!' when Indy emerges a second later with the rocket launcher, and continues to remain sarcastic and aloof to Indy ('what are you looking at daddio?') throughout the majority of the rest of the chase (and we can really only identify Mutt's full acceptance of Indy as his father at the end of the film, anyway). So, we would really lose nothing by removing his pause, and may gain slightly better pacing in doing so.
I think it was a combination of the revelation of Indy as his father and seeing Marion in action. He was kind of processing things. He wanted to say something, but he couldn't quite figure out what. It's natural, and I don't think it needs to be trimmed at all.
And I loved the "What are you looking at, Daddy-o?" moment--I don't think it's just him being distant, but he's actually kind of embarassed at his defeat by Spalko.
Really appreciate the help guys. I am finished with the video editing and it is really looking good. I even started some color correction and the values seem to work really well. Definitely looks like the OT. Some edits I've done recently include removing SOME of the CG gunpowder stuff - just went on a bit too long. I removed the shots of the aliens in the tent - now they're only seen behind the cloth. Less Alien in the climax, less saucer too.
Overall I just took out a lot of the goofiness, while still keeping the good, funny lines that adhere to the classic feel of Raiders.
Here are a few more questions:
1.) Is there any way to just download that 6 channel audio file?? I've downloaded 6 programs and none of them have worked!! :[
2.) How do I combine or merge sequences? (how do i erase razor cuts between sequences?)
3.) Is there any way to color correct the whole film as one? THis might be linked to question 2, but I have to color correct each sequence seperately and I have A LOT of sequences marked.
4.) This one is not Technical (yay). I really feel like the exposition in this film is repetitive and often throws the pacing off. Two scenes stand out - the cemetery dialog after they find the skull and the tent scene with Spalko. Any suggestions on what we DONT need to hear AGAIN in these two scenes? I would love to cut away when Indy says "what is this thing?" in the cemetery, and lose all of the what if's scenarios that we establish later on anyway.
List of propsed changes to Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/Kingdom-of-the-Crystal-Skull-Edit-Suggestions/topic/9732/
Left to do -
AUDIO!!! As soon as I get those 6 tracks.
Adding more OT music to certain scenes.
Trying to put in the "not as easy as it used to be" and "part time" lines from the trailer.
Putting in Laser's prairie dog free opening (with permission) and Marions (? I think that was Marion...?) cemetery gunshot edit (with permission.)
Whatever I decide in regards to the question 4 above.
"you're not from around here, are ya?" sounds really un-natural. I'm trying to figure out how to fix that scene also.
Ya know, after doing this edit, I've found a lot to like about this movie. I think watching it so much has helped me to accept it as part of the series.
List of propsed changes to Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/Kingdom-of-the-Crystal-Skull-Edit-Suggestions/topic/9732/
It sounds great that you're working on this edit, jones1899! Hope you'll be able to release it soon!
Thanks Idol, I'll admit I should have done it a lot sooner. Turns out I'm having a blast with it.
Any input on question 4 up above.
List of propsed changes to Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/Kingdom-of-the-Crystal-Skull-Edit-Suggestions/topic/9732/
You know, I don't recall if it was between my first viewing and second, or between my last viewing in theater and first at home, but at some point I actually had it in my head somehow that the Orellana's Cradle scene actually did end with "What is this thing?" It seems feasible. The only real challenge I can see is making the musical transition smooth. I don't recall precisely what the music is doing. If you can somehow get the music to go from wherever it is to the resolving chord that plays over them walking up the steps, then you should be in business.
I personally don't mind the remainder of the scene (I'm really curious as to what the scene was like with the ground collapsing beneath them), but I think this cut could be feasible, and fairly smooth.
Yeah. I guess my only concern is do we need any of the WHAT IFs coming from Indy and Mutt? Lord knows there is plenty of exposition in this film, and it feels like we hear the same crap over and over again. But is the possible fate of Orellana's men, and the fact that Ox was the one who'd been in the cemetery before made clear enough to the viewer without that dialog. Just seems to drag a bit, then we hear the same stuff from Spalko 5 minutes later, etc.
List of propsed changes to Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/Kingdom-of-the-Crystal-Skull-Edit-Suggestions/topic/9732/
Musicman - I had that exact cut in mind, also.
I agree with you, jones1899, that there is far too much exposition, and feel that we don't need the 'what if's, or the musings about Oxley at this point; transitioning from 'what is this thing?' to Indy and Mutt going up the steps would be seamless.
Remember, with the whole 'return' business, in regards to the word 'return' being written all over Ox's cell and the realisation that Oxley left clues in the note to find the skull, I think it's safe to assume that the audience would be able to grasp that Oxley was the one who both found and then later returned the skull (we are even reminded of this in the following scene with Indy and Spalko in the tent; 'now I know why Oxley put the skull back - he knew you were looking for it').
It's good to hear that you're tackling this head on, jones1899 - on the topic of needless-exposition, what are your thoughts on other areas of the movie which you think ought to be trimmed down, dialogue wise? I think this removing-of-pointless-explanations is possibly the best way to tighten up the film, and give it some velocity in terms of pacing.