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Journey of a Skywalker (up on youtube)

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It’s a fun idea, though I would suggest trying to center the dialogue. It’s really distracting to have talking on only one side, especially when using headphones. I hadn’t seen some of those shots before though, so that was cool to have them against some of the lines from the films.

On a broader design level, I’d also suggest sticking with a single font. Every one of your titles seems to be different, which can be a little jarring.

For something like this it might also be better to have it as a single, more edited piece. That would help you feel out the pacing to make sure nothing drags, while making it more cohesive as well. Having multiple pieces feels very fragmented.

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Siliconmaster482 said:

It’s a fun idea, though I would suggest trying to center the dialogue. It’s really distracting to have talking on only one side, especially when using headphones. I hadn’t seen some of those shots before though, so that was cool to have them against some of the lines from the films.

On a broader design level, I’d also suggest sticking with a single font. Every one of your titles seems to be different, which can be a little jarring.

For something like this it might also be better to have it as a single, more edited piece. That would help you feel out the pacing to make sure nothing drags, while making it more cohesive as well. Having multiple pieces feels very fragmented.

audio has been fixed