First and foremost I want to thank kg1977 on the hard work on this edit. It was truly well done and a very enjoyable experience. This is an edit I strongly recommend for others to enjoy as well.
As I look through the cut list, nearly everything you cut would have been the correct decision regardless of whether you were looking for a family friendly edition or not. The cuts really helped with some of the pacing issues the movie had and minimized portions of the movie where things were over exaggerated, such as the dinner scene with all of the special “food.” It looks like a lot of the poor dialogue that diminished the characters and felt annoying were also removed.
This is a great edit even for some adults. There are many adults who would not like to see a heart ripped out. I may edit that sequence back in for a separate more personal copy if I decide for a more gory version of the movie. However, some of the other more graphic elements you removed really do not need to be reinserted in a more graphic edit. As stated in your cut list, we can still see and hear what is going on. Trimming out an extra few seconds helps the pacing. We really do not need those graphic close ups as the audience can understand what is going on.
The enhanced FX were a very nice tough. These are things the casual viewer (like me) do not typically notice.
The only noticeable issue I saw around the 23:17 mark during the meal with the shaman. There was a quick and awkward cut when we are shown a shocked look by Indiana Jones for a split second that goes by a bit too quickly. This is really only a minor issue and I would not even bother correcting it unless there are more revisions you had in mind. I also know you were working various other edits that should also take priority.
If this edit is any indication, then the rest of your Indiana Jones edits will be a fun watch as well. I was planning to watch them chronologically according to what year they were set so TOD took place before Raiders, which will be up next.
Thank you again and I greatly appreciate the work you and other editors put into this.