Imp's MOVIE TRAILER SHOWCASE - Past, Present, and Coming Soon... — Page 5

TK-949 said:

Oh no. F*cking CGI monkeys.

I sure hope not…what’s the rating on this I wonder? 😉

thejediknighthusezni said:

I loved the preview of that movie.

I’m certainly interested to see how things develop in the next preview.

xhonzi said:

I wish they would have kept the title ‘planet free’ (previous title was just Rise of the Apes).

I kinda liked the original working title - ‘_CEASAR’.  _Either way, let’s hope it turns out to be a worthwhile revival of the franchise name.

X-MEN: FIRST CLASS  (released 2011/directed by Matthew Vaughn)

Teaser Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qZolGjctmWQ

International Trailer 1 (Chinese) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W4nPSJg66hk

International Trailer 2 (Russian) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tlnxucJ1DpQ

International Trailer 3 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FZfioIkfke0

International Trailer 4 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AkGkVgIVdkA

(I’ll add the previous X-MEN trailers/posters here too, sometime)

THIS IS MY ALTERNATIVE, MUCH-LONGER VERSION OF AN ENDING FOR ‘SOLO’ WHICH SHOWS THE ACTUAL ‘COAXIUM HEIST’, WHICH I ULTIMATELY DECIDED AGAINST SHOWING -

NOTE - HERE’S ROUGHLY HOW MY ALTERNATIVE, MUCH-LONGER RE-EDIT WOULD LOOK LIKE, IF I END UP WANTING TO INCLUDE THE ‘COAXIUM HEIST’ ITSELF! - I KINDA DECIDED AGAINST IT ORIGINALLY, TO LEAVE MORE TO THE IMAGINATION…BUT THERE ARE A FEW NICE MOMENTS INCLUDED IF I EVER CHOOSE TO DO SOMETHING LIKE THIS INSTEAD OF MY SHORTER VERSION WHICH I OUTLINED ON PAGE 1 -

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TRANSITIONS to Han in the corridor just outside the Falcon’s cockpit, as we see Lando piloting it -

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TRANSITIONS to Han slowly entering the cockpit, as he says This is a corellian YT Thirteen Hundred -

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NOTE - ALTHOUGH IT MIGHT BE SMOOTHER TO CONTINUE THE CONVERSATION ABOUT HAN’S DAD, AND LANDO NOT GETTING ON WITH HIS DAD EITHER, BEFORE I CUT TO LANDO GETTING OUT OF CHAIR…I’M NOT 100% SURE IF I WANT TO HAVE HAN GIVING SO MUCH AWAY ABOUT HIS PAST TO LANDO, OR THAT THEY DIDN’T GET ON WITH THEIR DAD’S…OR IF I WANT TO KEEP THE DIALOGUE MUCH SIMPLER AND UNCOMPLICATED INSTEAD - NOT 100% SURE ON THIS YET.

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ADDITIONAL NOTE TO WHAT I’VE WRITTEN BELOW - I’M NOT SURE IF I WANT TO INCLUDE GOOD MOMENTS OF BECKETT TALKING TO HAN/HOLOCHESS WITH CHEWIE SCENES OR NOT…AS I REALLY DISLIKE THAT THE PRISTINE INTERIOR IS SO RADICALLY DIFFERENT-LOOKING TO HOW THE INTERIOR LOOKS IN THE ORIGINAL TRILOGY!

NOTE - I’VE STILL TO FINISH OFF THE SHOT OF HAN WINNING THE FALCON FOR MY ‘MINI-MOVIE’ (WHICH INCORPORATES MY OBI-WAN KENOBI FOOTAGE BEFOREHAND - TO MAKE IT SEEM THE ‘SOLO’ STORY IS HAPPENING YEARS LATER WHEN HAN IS MUCH OLDER THAN LEIA AT THIS POINT THAN IN THE KENOBI TV SHOW!), AND THE SHOTS BELOW SHOW HOW I’D THEN ‘JUMP-FORWARD’ TO HAN, CHEWIE, LANDO, AND BECKETT INVOLVED IN SMUGGLING ABOARD THE FALCON -

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NOTE - THIS IS HOW I MIGHT END UP CONCLUDING MY ‘MINI-ADVENTURE’ AFTER LANDO GETS OUT OF HIS CHAIR - I THINK THAT RATHER THAN DOING A ‘JUMP-AHEAD-IN-TIME’ TO BECKETT OPENING FALCON FLOOR TO CHECK ON COAXIUM CANISTERS AFTER LAND GETS OUT OF HIS CHAIR, I REALLY NEED TO SHOW AN EARLIER ‘JUMP-AHEAD-IN-TIME’ TO THE COAXIUM HEIST IN SOME WAY OR OTHER INSTEAD! - POSSIBLY, STARTING WITH BECKETT TELLING EVERYONE “STICK TO THE PLAN…DO NOT IMPROVISE!” (OR WOULD I NEED TO INSERT ONE OF THE BECKETT/INTERIOR SHOTS BEFOREHAND TO SMOOTH IT BETTER??)…OR POSSIBLY STARTING WTIH HAN AND CHEWIE CAUSING CHAOS ON A MONITOR INSTEAD??, AS WE CUT TO THEM ATTACKING GUARDS AND HAN BREAKS OUT OF HIS CHAINS ETC. - AND POSSIBLY ENDING ON THIS SHOT AS HAN SAYS “GOOD TO SEE YOU BUDDY!”…AND THEN POSSIBLY CUTTING TO HAN LEAPING INTO SEAT AND TAKING OFF??..OR POSSIBLY CHEWIE GETTING IN CHAIR BEHIND Q’IRA AND HAN??..OR POSSIBLY LANDO TALKING ABOUT THEIR CARGO GETTING HOT??

This is not necessarily where I’ll be starting the ‘coaxium heist’ (I start with the whole Han and Chewie breaking out and getting costumes notion, with them then splitting up as Chewie goes to help other wookiees…or I may start at the point where Q’ira says “Han, where are you?” instead - NOT SURE YET (OR does it work to start with close-up of slaves shackles being unlocked?? - in fact, will that scene work out if I include it ANYWHERE?? - NOT SURE YET.

FINISH OFF PICS AND DIALOGUE HERE!

NOTE - Originally, I had intended to start the ‘Coaxium heist’ after Lando gets up out of seat, by then CUTTING to a close-up of a monitor screen showing Han and Chewie in chains (SEE PICS BELOW THIS PARAGRAPH), as a door grating comes down (immediately after Q’ira and the silver droid walk past out of shot!)…BUT AS IT’S SUCH A GREAT SCENE (DESPITE THE LOOK OF THE INTERIOR), I’M NOW THINKING OF CUTTING TO BECKETT PLAYING CHEWIE AT HOLO-CHESS UNTIL HE SAYS “…NO, YOU CAN’T WIPE THEM OFF, THEY’RE HOLOGRAMS”…THEN AS HAN ENTERS THE ROOM TO BECKETT TRYING TO CALM CHEWIE DOWN, I’D EITHER COMPLETELY END THE SCENE BY CUTTING AT THE CLOSE-UP OF BECKETT SAYING “THERE’S A LESSON TO BE LEARNED HERE!”…OR, I’D THEN INSTEAD CONTINUE ON A BIT, BY THEN CUTTING TO THE CLOSE-UP OF HAN SMILING AS HE WALKS OFF…AS WE THEN TRANSITION TO THE CLOSE-UP OF CHEWIE GROWLING MOURNFULLY, AND COMPLETELY END THE SCENE THERE - NOT SURE YET!..THEN I’D CUT TO BECKETT, Q’IRA, HAN, AND CHEWIE IN FALCON COCKPIT, AS BECKETT SAYS “STICK TO THE PLAN…DO NOT IMPROVISE!”…THEN I’D CUT TO TINY FALCON DIVING DOWN TOWARDS SPICE MINES (IMMEDIATELY AFTER WE HEAR BECKETT SAYING “YEAH, WELL THE WORST IS WHERE THE MONEY IS”)…AS WE TRANSITION TO BECKETT SAYING “ALRIGHT PEOPLE, TIME TO SHINE!”, AS HAN FOLLOWS HIM, AND Q’IRA MOVES FORWARD BESIDE CHEWIE…AND THEN I’D CUT TO SOME SORT OF RE-EDIT OF THE PIKE BOSS WALKING TOWARDS Q’IRA…AS WE THEN TRANSITON TO HAN AND CHEWIE GETTING OUT OF FALCON IN SHACKLES, AS CHEWIE GROWLS AND HAN SAYS “IT WON’T BE FOR LONG”…AS WE THEN TRANSITION TO A CLOSE-UP OF BECKETT SAYING “SHUDDUP, THE BOTH OF YOU!”…THEN I’D CUT TO A CLOSE-UP OF HAN OPENING ONE OF HIS HANDS TO REVEAL HIS LUCKY DICE…AS WE TRANSITION TO HIM LOOKING BACK, THEN GETTING PUSHED FORWARDS…AS WE THEN TRANSITION TO CLOSE-UP OF Q’IRA LOOKING BACK…AS WE TRANSITION TO WIDE SHOT OF Q’IRA AND BECKETT FOLLOWING THE PIKE BOSS AND CO. INTO THE MINES (WE SEE A PORTION OF THE FALCON HERE)…AS WE THEN TRANSITION TO A DOORWAY OPENING AS THE PIKE BOSS LEADS THE GROUP INTO THE CONTROL ROOM, AND THE SILVER DROID EXPLAINS HOW THINGS FUNCTION…AND WE CONTINUE AS PER THE MOVIE RIGHT UP UNTIL I END UP CUTTING ONCE THE SILVER DROID SAYS “WOAH!”…AND THEN I’D CUT TO THE DOORWAY OPENING, AS BECKETT SAYS “NICELY NEGOTIATED!”

FINISH SHOTS AND DIALOGUE HERE!

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NOTE - I’VE DECIDED TO INCLUDE THE SILVER DROID IN THE FEW SCENES SHOWN ABOVE, AS I LIKE THE DESIGN OF IT ENOUGH TO INCLUDE IT, AND IT CAN BE LOOKED ON AS THE PIKE BOSS’S ‘INTERPRETER’ DROID! - It also helps with the flow of those scenes, as it came across a bit choppy in the way I was going to originally re-edit it WITHOUT the silver droid (NOTE - I’ve added my original version at the very bottom of this post)

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NOTE - NOT YET SURE OF THE BEST WAY I WANT TO RE-EDIT THE NEXT FEW SHOTS OF THE DROID BURBLING, AND BECKETT LOOKING OVER - I’VE PUT THE EXISTING ORDER OF SHOTS BELOW, BUT COME BACK TO FINISH THIS! - ADDITIONAL NOTE - If I decide not to include Chewie holding ripped-off arm, then I might instead cut directly from the screen going blank above, to the close-up of the droid reacting below - NOT SURE YET!

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**NOTE - I WAS ORIGINALLY THEN GOING TO CUT TO THE SHOT BELOW OF HAN AND CHEWIE EXITING AN OPENING DOORWAY…BUT DUE TO THE FACT THAT ALL THIS WAS A BIT ‘CHOPPY’, AND THE FACT THAT I WANT TO INCLUDE A LITTLE OF THE SILVER DROID DESIGN NOW (IMAGINING IT AS THE PIKE BOSS’S ‘INTERPRETER/PROTOCOL’ DROID), I’VE INSTEAD DECIDED TO CONTINUE ON WITH Q’IRA OVERCOMING THE PIKE BOSS AS THE SILVER DROID SAYS “WOAH!”…THEN CUTTING TO THE DOORWAY OPENING AND BECKETT SAYING “NICELY NEGOTIATED!”…THEN TRANSITIONING TO HAN AND CHEWIE EXITING AN OPENING DOORWAY - FINISH PICS AND DIALOGUE OFF
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NOTE - I MIGHT POSSIBLY END THE COAXIUM HEIST AT THIS POINT, AND THEN CUT TO BECKETT LIFTING THE FLOOR PANELS??

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NOTE - I MIGHT NOT END UP USING THE SHOTS ABOVE OF BECKETT LOOKING AT THE RED-HOT COAXIUM CANISTERS (AND WOULD JUST CUT DIRECTLY FROM CHEWIE SITTING DOWN TO SPINNING DEVICE IN THAT CASE)…OR I MIGHT JUST END UP NOT USING THE SHOTS OF THE CANISTERS BELOW - NOT SURE YET!

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NOTE - IF I INCLUDE ANY OF ‘THE RED-HOT COAXIUM CANISTERS/BECKETT LOOKING DOWN’ SHOTS, THEN I MIGHT THEN CUT TO THIS ‘LANDO IN FALCON COCKPIT’ SHOT WHERE HE MENTIONS THE CARGO THAT THEY’RE CARRYING - NOT SURE YET!

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NOTE - THIS WAS AN OLDER IDEA - NOT SURE IF I WANT TO SHOW A RE-EDITED VERSION OF THE FALCON ESCAPING THE MOVIE’S ‘SPINNING MAW’ AND CRASHING ROCKS AT THIS POINT, OR NOT - SAY, START WITH CLOSE-UP SHOT OF FALCON’S DISH BEING RIPPED OFF, AND EVENTUALLY END WITH FALCON ACCELERATING FAST AND MAKING IT THROUGH THE CRASHING ROCKS - HOWEVER, I DON’T REALLY LIKE THE LOOK OF ALL THAT, SO MIGHT JUST LEAVE ‘THE KESSEL RUN’ TO THE IMAGINATION!

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ADD MORE PICS HERE - WHEN I COME TO DRYDEN VOSS, I COULD HAVE HIM TELLING HAN THAT HE WOULD BELIEVE HIM BECAUSE THE COAXIUM LOOKS LIKE THE REAL THING EXCEPT HIS ASSOCIATE ALREADY TOLD HIM ABOUT HIS PLAN TO ROB HIM OF HIS MONEY, AND GIVE THE REAL COAXIUM TO ENFYS NEST…THEN CUT DIRECTLY TO CLOSE-UP OF SITTING Q’IRA LOOKING SCARED AS DRYDEN SHOUTS THAT Q’IRA IT TURNS OUT HAS A WEAK SPOT FOR YOU, AND WE’LL DEAL WITH THAT LATER…THEN GETS OFF CHAIR AND PUTS THE COAXIUM ON TABLE AS HE SAYS NO, I’M TALKING ABOUT MY OTHER ASSOCIATE…AS HE PICKS UP A DEVICE AND ASKS HIM TO COME IN AND JOIN THEM…AS THEY TURN TO SEE BECKETT COME IN.

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NOT 100% SURE HOW I’M DOING THE ABOVE SCENES AND DIALOGUE BETWEEN BECKETT AND HAN YET. wAS ORIGINALLY JUST GOING TO HAVE BECKETT LEAVING FOR TATTOOINE AND WALKING AWAY FROM HAN (POSSIBLY NOT WAVING AND GIRL WAVING BACK, NOT SURE YET), BUT…MIGHT…BE ABLE TO SHOW HAN’S ‘PLAN’ TO FOOL DRYDEN AND BECKETT, WITH HAN SHOOTING BECKETT - NOT SURE YET, AND WOULD ENFYS NEST TRUST HAN WITH THE COAXIUM?, OR RISK SOMETHING GOING WRONG WITH THE PLAN, AND DRYDEN GETTING IT?, RATHER THAN JUST TAKING IT THERE AND THEN AS SOON AS IT’S REFINED?..OR DOES SHE TRUST THEM HOPING THEY WILL JOIN HER AS AN ALLY? - AND HOW DO I HANDLE Q’IRA? - DO I JUST HAVE THE SHIP LEAVING WITH HER LOOKING OUT WISTFULLY? - OR DO I HAVE HER TAKING THE RING OFF DRYDEN AND PUTTING IT IN THE CONTROLS FIRST? - OR DO I CUT FROM HAN SHOOTING BECKETT TO HIM AND CHEWIE WALKING TOWARDS GIRL AND MARAUDERS WITH COAXIUM CANISTERS? - OR DO I FIRST SHOW HAN RUNNING OVER TO BECKETT, BUT DON’T HAVE BECKETT SAYING ANYTHING BEFORE HE DIES - IS THIS EVEN POSSIBLE?

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(NOTE - SOME OF THIS BELOW WAS WRITTEN BEFORE I DECIDED ON THE FINAL ORDER OF SCREENSHOTS SHOWN ABOVE)

THEN EVENTUALLY DO A RE-EDIT OF THE SCENE WHERE HAN AND CHEWIE AND THE GANG ARE TALKING AROUND THE FIRE AT NIGHT (IF I INCLUDE THE HAN AND THE GIRL SPEEDER CHASE AT THE BEGINNING, WILL I NEED TO INCORPORATE HAN SAYING THE “I GOT OUT, SHE DIDN’T” LINE BESIDE THE CAMP FIRE?)…THEN CONTINUE ON AS WE SEE THE TRAIN HEIST, AND END/(FADE OUT??) WITH BECKETT APOLOGISING FOR HITTING HAN, AS HAN SAYS IT HAPPENS MORE OFTEN THAN HE THINKS (WITH THE ODD RE-EDIT HERE AND THERE THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE SEQUENCE)…

THEN CUT/(FADE IN??) TO CLAPPING AS WE SEE HAN GOING TO APPROACH LANDO TO GAMBLE FOR THE FALCON WITH HIM, AND WINNING (WITH Q’IRA EDITED OUT)…

THEN CUT TO THE BATTERED FALCON LANDING ON A SANDY PLANET, AS HAN AND CHEWIE UNLOAD SOME PRESUMABLY STOLEN OR SMUGGLED COAXIUM, AS AN INJURED LANDO TELLS HAN HE NEVER WANTS TO SEE HIM AGAIN, AND WALKS OFF IN DISGUST, AS HAN TURNS TOWARDS US…AND SHOT FADES TO BLACK (NOTE - BECKETT IS SEEN TALKING IN THE BACKGROUND, PRESUMABLY HAVING DONE THIS LATEST JOB WITH HAN, CHEWIE, AND LANDO…SO I MIGHT ALSO ADD IN ONE OF THE TWO SHOTS OF HIM LOOKING AT THE HIDDEN COAXIUM UNDER THE FLOOR PANELS) -

…THEN INSTEAD OF ANY IRIS/END CREDITS MUSIC, I MIGHT JUST SHOW THE LUCASFILM LOGO SILENTLY FADE INTO VIEW AGAIN, THEN FADE OUT AGAIN. (OR COULD JUST HAVE IT SHOWING ONCE, IF I ONLY USE BLUE ‘A LONG TIME AGO IN A GALAXY FAR, FAR AWAY…’ WORDING AS AN INTRO.)

MY VERY LATEST IDEA ON THIS - DUE TO WANTING A KEEP A BIT MORE OF THE ‘WORLD-BUILDING’ OF NEW STAR WARSY SETTINGS SUCH AS ‘CORELLIA’, I’VE DECIDED TO TURN THIS INTO A KIND OF ‘BACKSTORY ADVENTURE/DOUBLE MINI-FEATURE’ NOW, WHICH COMBINES MY SOLO SEQUENCES AND OBI-WAN KENOBI SEQUENCES INTO ONE SINGLE, JOINT POST-‘PREQUELS’/PRE-‘ORIGINAL TRILOGY’ FEATURE INVOLVING ‘SHORT ADVENTURES’ FROM THEIR ‘YOUNGER’ YEARS! - SO AFTER WE SEE THE FINAL SHOT OF HAN TURNING TO FACE US, I’D THEN (PERHAPS) CUT TO THE COPPER-COLOURED ‘LUCASFILM’ LOGO, THEN CUT TO THE ‘OBI-WAN KENOBI’ TITLE, THEN CUT TO MY FIRST OBI-WAN KENOBI SCENE.

OR…PERHAPS I’D EVEN CUT TOGETHER MY SHORTENED VERSIONS OF ‘SOLO’, ‘THE BOOK OF BOBA FETT’, AND ‘OBI-WAN KENOBI’ TO MAKE A ‘TRIPLE’ MINI-FEATURE, WITH EACH STORY JUST SEPERATED BY A FADE TO BLACK IN-BETWEEN THEM, OR SEPERATED BY THE SILENT, RECEEDING ‘STAR WARS’ TITLE, OR SEPERATED BY THE SILENT BLUE WORDING.

MY VERY, VERY LATEST IDEAS ON THIS - I MIGHT decide to cut from Han and Q’ira running away on Correlia…to the ACTUAL SOUND of the planet sunrise shot, and CONTINUE ON for a bit as Han and Chewie interact a little (as I like the music and visuals of flying through the clouds)…BEFORE then seeing Han lying on the snowy ground with Beckett and Val, planning a heist - I’m NOT 100% sure where I want to cut short Han and Chewie’s dialogue together, but I MIGHT end on Han saying Thanks for getting me out of there as they both face forward, and CUT to them both still facing forward as Han asks So what’s your name anyway?, and Chewie ROARS, and I end on Han’s mouth still shut…and CUT to Han’s close-up as he says Yeah, well, your gonna need a nickname ‘cos I ain’t sayin’ that every time!, as chewie growls and we then see Han and Beckett and Val lying on the snow. - **I THINK IT SOUNDS FUNNIER THIS WAY IF WE DON’T HEAR HAN SAYING CHEWBACCA’S NAME!, AND MAKES CHEWBACCA MORE MYSTERIOUS AND POWERFUL IF HE STAYS SILENT UNTIL HE EVENTUALLY ROARS HIS NAME AT HAN - BUT NOT SURE YET IF I WANT TO MAKE OUT THAT HAN AND CHEWIE HAVE BEEN BUDDIE’S FOR A WHILE, AND WOULD ALREADY KNOW HIS NAME!

ALSO, I MIGHT recut the group interaction so that it flows with a harder edge like this, with much less dialogue throughout, BUT I’M NOT 100% SURE YET - The end of the scene where they are lying on the snow ends with Val saying Well you better be right, 'cos sometimes you put your faith in the wrong people, as Han looks around at her, as we continue with them walking through snow as Val continues to say Our whole future depends on this one score, and you bring in amateurs, as Beckett replies In case you hadn’t noticed, we’re a little short handed*, as we continue on a sunset ridge as Val says So we get who we need, the Zan sisters, or, or Bossk…then CUT to Han beside a fire saying **Look, I waited a long time for a shot like this, I’m not about to screw it up, alright?*, as we continue with Val clicking her big gun, as we continue with 4-armed alien pointing a knife as he says Oh come on Val, you look so sincere, as he puts knife down and climbs a wall saying Plus, have you ever tried to disinvite a Wookiee to anything?, not a good idea!…as we CUT to (silent) Chewie putting on his bandolero, as Han smirks, and Beckett kisses a handgun which he throws to Han, as we see the handgun against the fire, and then see the monotrain sparking on the rail. - THIS SHOWS US EVERYONE IN THE GROUP BEFORE THE HEIST, AND GIVES CHEWIE A POWERFUL MOMENT AS HE STAYS SILENT, AND LEAVES OUT ALL MENTION OF Q’IRA.

UPDATED LATEST THOUGHTS - I’m now wanting to show a re-edited version of the WHOLE 'Han and Q’ira escaping with a vial of coaxium in a stolen speeder as my introduction to Han…FOLLOWED by Han and Chewie ALREADY BUDDIES when they join a major coaxium heist from a monorail (NOTE- It could be imagined that the way I’ve recut the initial dialogue between Han and Chewie implies that Han either let Q’ira have the vial’s worth coaxium to make a new life for herself, or she double-crossed him (the scheming bitch!)…leaving him still ‘in debt’ to someone, meaning he had to get involved with this heist to make enough money to free himself and his buddy Chewie from it…except it doesn’t work out due to the coaxium shipment blowing up, and he eventually ends up gambling for Lando’s ship, and gets involved in smuggling escapades with it thereafter to keep the ‘Crimson Dawn’ syndicate off off his and Chewie’s back (briefly involving Beckett and Lando along the way also (LANDO IS STILL PEE’D OFF ABOUT LOSING THE FALCON AFTER FINDING OUT THAT HAN DIDN’T HAVE A SHIP OF HIS OWN TO GAMBLE WITH IN THE FIRST PLACE!)…leading into how we still find Han and Chewie together in STAR WARS:A NEW HOPE.

REMEMBER - I wanted to incorporate a scene (or was it 2 scenes?) of Beckett looking at coaxium heating up.

ABSOLUTE LATEST IDEAS…PERHAPS? - when Lando walks away from Han towards the Falcon, that’s the final time we would see him in this re-edit, and then CUT to Han, Chewie, Beckett, and Q’ira walking up towards the bar, before they encounter Enfys Nest and her marauders (I’D CUT OUT JOKEY HAN WALKING FORWARD AND THE FALCON TAKING OFF), as Enfys tells them about what happened to the people of various planets…then TRANSITION to Chewie looking out at Han walking towards Beckett in the distance…then CUT to Chewie looking out as Q’ira tell Enfys that Han is going to help…then TRANSITION to Beckett telling Han I see…(ETC) and that he’s leaving and mentions that he going to Tattooine for one last score as we end on Han’s serious face…then CUT to Beckett leaving down hill, as we end on Han’s serious face…then CUT to 2 kids standing in foreground as Han and Chewie carry a lot of coaxium up to Enfys, and she gives him a small vial of it before they leave…then CUT to close-up of switches as Han mentions that Beckett told him about a gangster’s job, and they fly off in the Falcon…THEN CUT to alien gangmembers entering Enfys Nest’s camp and surrounding Enfys and her marauders, telling them to drop their weapons…then CUT to the actual girl launching a surprise attack on the alien gangmembers, as she and her marauders kill them all…then CUT to black, and finish with the silent Lucasfilm logo??? - NEW THOUGHTS ON THIS, IT’S ALL WRONG! - INSTEAD, I’M NOW DEFINITELY KEEPING SCENE OF HAN AND CHEWIE FLYING OFF IN THE FALCON TO LIGHTSPEED AND DICE FOR MY ENDING, NO MATTER HOW I RE-EDIT IT SLIGHTLY.

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**STILL TO ADD PICS BELOW SHOWING HOW I’D RE-EDIT THE USUAL STORYLINE OF HAN, Q’IRA, AND CHEWIE TAKING THE COAXIUM TO DRYDEN VOSS’S SHIP, AND THEN BEING BETRAYED BY BECKETT ETC., TO SEE WHETHER I’D PREFER TO HAVE IT PLAY OUT THIS WAY SO THAT I’D BE ABLE TO INCORPORATE, MY RE-EDITED VERSION OF HAN SHOOTING BECKETT, AND THEN SHOWING THE SCENE OF HAN AND CHEWIE RETURNING THE COAXIUM CONTAINERS TO THE GIRL AND HER MARAUDERS. NOTE - NOT SURE AT THIS POINT IF I REALLY WANT TO SHOW Q’IRA LEAVING IN DRYDEN VOSS’S SHIP OR NOT.

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NOT 100% SURE HOW I’M DOING THE ABOVE SCENES AND DIALOGUE BETWEEN BECKETT AND HAN YET - I WAS ORIGINALLY JUST GOING TO HAVE BECKETT LEAVING FOR TATTOOINE AND WALKING AWAY FROM HAN (POSSIBLY NOT WAVING AND GIRL WAVING BACK, NOT SURE YET), BUT…MIGHT…BE ABLE TO SHOW HAN’S ‘PLAN’ TO FOOL DRYDEN AND BECKETT, WITH HAN SHOOTING BECKETT - NOT SURE YET, AND WOULD ENFYS NEST TRUST HAN WITH THE COAXIUM?, OR RISK SOMETHING GOING WRONG WITH THE PLAN, AND DRYDEN GETTING IT?, RATHER THAN JUST TAKING IT THERE AND THEN AS SOON AS IT’S REFINED?..OR DOES SHE TRUST THEM HOPING THEY WILL JOIN HER AS AN ALLY? - AND HOW DO I HANDLE Q’IRA? - DO I JUST HAVE THE SHIP LEAVING WITH HER LOOKING OUT WISTFULLY? - OR DO I HAVE HER TAKING THE RING OFF DRYDEN AND PUTTING IT IN THE CONTROLS FIRST? - OR DO I CUT FROM HAN SHOOTING BECKETT TO HIM AND CHEWIE WALKING TOWARDS GIRL AND MARAUDERS WITH COAXIUM CANISTERS? - OR DO I FIRST SHOW HAN RUNNING OVER TO BECKETT, BUT DON’T HAVE BECKETT SAYING ANYTHING BEFORE HE DIES - IS THIS EVEN POSSIBLE? - IF I DID END UP SHOWING MORE OF DRYDEN VOSS AND BECKETT, I WOULD AT THIS POINT CUT FROM Q’IRA SAYING Their fine!, DIRECTLY TO INSIDE MAIN LOUNGE AS HAN SAYS YOU…WANT ME TO OPEN IT?

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(NOTE - SOME OF THIS BELOW WAS WRITTEN BEFORE I DECIDED ON THE FINAL ORDER OF SCREENSHOTS SHOWN ABOVE)

THEN EVENTUALLY DO A RE-EDIT OF THE SCENE WHERE HAN AND CHEWIE AND THE GANG ARE TALKING AROUND THE FIRE AT NIGHT (IF I INCLUDE THE HAN AND THE GIRL SPEEDER CHASE AT THE BEGINNING, WILL I NEED TO INCORPORATE HAN SAYING THE “I GOT OUT, SHE DIDN’T” LINE BESIDE THE CAMP FIRE?)…THEN CONTINUE ON AS WE SEE THE TRAIN HEIST, AND END/(FADE OUT??) WITH BECKETT APOLOGISING FOR HITTING HAN, AS HAN SAYS IT HAPPENS MORE OFTEN THAN HE THINKS (WITH THE ODD RE-EDIT HERE AND THERE THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE SEQUENCE)…

THEN CUT/(FADE IN??) TO CLAPPING AS WE SEE HAN GOING TO APPROACH LANDO TO GAMBLE FOR THE FALCON WITH HIM, AND WINNING (WITH Q’IRA EDITED OUT)…

THEN CUT TO THE BATTERED FALCON LANDING ON A SANDY PLANET, AS HAN AND CHEWIE UNLOAD SOME PRESUMABLY STOLEN OR SMUGGLED COAXIUM, AS AN INJURED LANDO TELLS HAN HE NEVER WANTS TO SEE HIM AGAIN, AND WALKS OFF IN DISGUST, AS HAN TURNS TOWARDS US…AND SHOT FADES TO BLACK (NOTE - BECKETT IS SEEN TALKING IN THE BACKGROUND, PRESUMABLY HAVING DONE THIS LATEST JOB WITH HAN, CHEWIE, AND LANDO…SO I MIGHT ALSO ADD IN ONE OF THE TWO SHOTS OF HIM LOOKING AT THE HIDDEN COAXIUM UNDER THE FLOOR PANELS) -

…THEN INSTEAD OF ANY IRIS/END CREDITS MUSIC, I MIGHT JUST SHOW THE LUCASFILM LOGO SILENTLY FADE INTO VIEW AGAIN, THEN FADE OUT AGAIN. (OR COULD JUST HAVE IT SHOWING ONCE, IF I ONLY USE BLUE ‘A LONG TIME AGO IN A GALAXY FAR, FAR AWAY…’ WORDING AS AN INTRO.)

MY VERY LATEST IDEA ON THIS - DUE TO WANTING A KEEP A BIT MORE OF THE ‘WORLD-BUILDING’ OF NEW STAR WARSY SETTINGS SUCH AS ‘CORELLIA’, I’VE DECIDED TO TURN THIS INTO A KIND OF ‘BACKSTORY ADVENTURE/DOUBLE MINI-FEATURE’ NOW, WHICH COMBINES MY SOLO SEQUENCES AND OBI-WAN KENOBI SEQUENCES INTO ONE SINGLE, JOINT POST-‘PREQUELS’/PRE-‘ORIGINAL TRILOGY’ FEATURE INVOLVING ‘SHORT ADVENTURES’ FROM THEIR ‘YOUNGER’ YEARS! - SO AFTER WE SEE THE FINAL SHOT OF HAN TURNING TO FACE US, I’D THEN (PERHAPS) CUT TO THE COPPER-COLOURED ‘LUCASFILM’ LOGO, THEN CUT TO THE ‘OBI-WAN KENOBI’ TITLE, THEN CUT TO MY FIRST OBI-WAN KENOBI SCENE.

OR…PERHAPS I’D EVEN CUT TOGETHER MY SHORTENED VERSIONS OF ‘SOLO’, ‘THE BOOK OF BOBA FETT’, AND ‘OBI-WAN KENOBI’ TO MAKE A ‘TRIPLE’ MINI-FEATURE, WITH EACH STORY JUST SEPERATED BY A FADE TO BLACK IN-BETWEEN THEM, OR SEPERATED BY THE SILENT, RECEEDING ‘STAR WARS’ TITLE, OR SEPERATED BY THE SILENT BLUE WORDING.

MY VERY, VERY LATEST IDEAS ON THIS - I MIGHT decide to cut from Han and Q’ira running away on Correlia…to the ACTUAL SOUND of the planet sunrise shot, and CONTINUE ON for a bit as Han and Chewie interact a little (as I like the music and visuals of flying through the clouds)…BEFORE then seeing Han lying on the snowy ground with Beckett and Val, planning a heist - I’m NOT 100% sure where I want to cut short Han and Chewie’s dialogue together, but I MIGHT end on Han saying Thanks for getting me out of there as they both face forward, and CUT to them both still facing forward as Han asks So what’s your name anyway?, and Chewie ROARS, and I end on Han’s mouth still shut…and CUT to Han’s close-up as he says Yeah, well, your gonna need a nickname ‘cos I ain’t sayin’ that every time!, as chewie growls and we then see Han and Beckett and Val lying on the snow. - **I THINK IT SOUNDS FUNNIER THIS WAY IF WE DON’T HEAR HAN SAYING CHEWBACCA’S NAME!, AND MAKES CHEWBACCA MORE MYSTERIOUS AND POWERFUL IF HE STAYS SILENT UNTIL HE EVENTUALLY ROARS HIS NAME AT HAN - BUT NOT SURE YET IF I WANT TO MAKE OUT THAT HAN AND CHEWIE HAVE BEEN BUDDIE’S FOR A WHILE, AND WOULD ALREADY KNOW HIS NAME!

ALSO, I MIGHT recut the group interaction so that it flows with a harder edge like this, with much less dialogue throughout, BUT I’M NOT 100% SURE YET - The end of the scene where they are lying on the snow ends with Val saying Well you better be right, 'cos sometimes you put your faith in the wrong people, as Han looks around at her, as we continue with them walking through snow as Val continues to say Our whole future depends on this one score, and you bring in amateurs, as Beckett replies In case you hadn’t noticed, we’re a little short handed*, as we continue on a sunset ridge as Val says So we get who we need, the Zan sisters, or, or Bossk…then CUT to Han beside a fire saying **Look, I waited a long time for a shot like this, I’m not about to screw it up, alright?*, as we continue with Val clicking her big gun, as we continue with 4-armed alien pointing a knife as he says Oh come on Val, you look so sincere, as he puts knife down and climbs a wall saying Plus, have you ever tried to disinvite a Wookiee to anything?, not a good idea!…as we CUT to (silent) Chewie putting on his bandolero, as Han smirks, and Beckett kisses a handgun which he throws to Han, as we see the handgun against the fire, and then see the monotrain sparking on the rail. - THIS SHOWS US EVERYONE IN THE GROUP BEFORE THE HEIST, AND GIVES CHEWIE A POWERFUL MOMENT AS HE STAYS SILENT, AND LEAVES OUT ALL MENTION OF Q’IRA.

UPDATED LATEST THOUGHTS - I’m now wanting to show a re-edited version of the WHOLE 'Han and Q’ira escaping with a vial of coaxium in a stolen speeder as my introduction to Han…FOLLOWED by Han and Chewie ALREADY BUDDIES when they join a major coaxium heist from a monorail (NOTE- It could be imagined that the way I’ve recut the initial dialogue between Han and Chewie implies that Han either let Q’ira have the vial’s worth coaxium to make a new life for herself, or she double-crossed him (the scheming bitch!)…leaving him still ‘in debt’ to someone, meaning he had to get involved with this heist to make enough money to free himself and his buddy Chewie from it…except it doesn’t work out due to the coaxium shipment blowing up, and he eventually ends up gambling for Lando’s ship, and gets involved in smuggling escapades with it thereafter to keep the ‘Crimson Dawn’ syndicate off off his and Chewie’s back (briefly involving Beckett and Lando along the way also (LANDO IS STILL PEE’D OFF ABOUT LOSING THE FALCON AFTER FINDING OUT THAT HAN DIDN’T HAVE A SHIP OF HIS OWN TO GAMBLE WITH IN THE FIRST PLACE!)…leading into how we still find Han and Chewie together in STAR WARS:A NEW HOPE.

REMEMBER - I wanted to incorporate a scene (or was it 2 scenes?) of Beckett looking at coaxium heating up.

ABSOLUTE LATEST IDEAS…PERHAPS? - when Lando walks away from Han towards the Falcon, that’s the final time we would see him in this re-edit, and then CUT to Han, Chewie, Beckett, and Q’ira walking up towards the bar, before they encounter Enfys Nest and her marauders (I’D CUT OUT JOKEY HAN WALKING FORWARD AND THE FALCON TAKING OFF), as Enfys tells them about what happened to the people of various planets…then TRANSITION to Chewie looking out at Han walking towards Beckett in the distance…then CUT to Chewie looking out as Q’ira tell Enfys that Han is going to help…then TRANSITION to Beckett telling Han I see…(ETC) and that he’s leaving and mentions that he going to Tattooine for one last score as we end on Han’s serious face…then CUT to Beckett leaving down hill, as we end on Han’s serious face…then CUT to 2 kids standing in foreground as Han and Chewie carry a lot of coaxium up to Enfys, and she gives him a small vial of it before they leave…then CUT to close-up of switches as Han mentions that Beckett told him about a gangster’s job, and they fly off in the Falcon…THEN CUT to alien gangmembers entering Enfys Nest’s camp and surrounding Enfys and her marauders, telling them to drop their weapons…then CUT to the actual girl launching a surprise attack on the alien gangmembers, as she and her marauders kill them all…then CUT to black, and finish with the silent Lucasfilm logo??? - NEW THOUGHTS ON THIS, IT’S ALL WRONG! - INSTEAD, I’M NOW DEFINITELY KEEPING SCENE OF HAN AND CHEWIE FLYING OFF IN THE FALCON TO LIGHTSPEED AND DICE FOR MY ENDING, NO MATTER HOW I RE-EDIT IT SLIGHTLY.

FINAL DECISION ON MY NEW STORYLINE - Considering their previous run-ins with Beckett and Han, I reckon Enfys Nest and the marauders wouldn’t risk Han taking away the refined coaxium to Dryden Voss in the first place, in case they were double-crossed and lost out on getting the coaxium! And seeing as they outnumber Han & co. so much, they can just overwhelm them to take it for themselves, as well as plan how to tackle Dryden Voss’s gang members if they happen to turn up before the coaxium is refined, as Beckett claimed. And I find it a bit far-fetched that Dryden Voss thinks the coaxium that Han brings is actually a good fake, even if Beckett tells him that, but fair enough. Still keep Beckett leaving as a good last appearance by him, as their conversation kinda implies that Han MIGHT have come up with the plan to have the old woman take the place of Efyns Nest - and gives some kind of reason why Efyns Nest hands over a vial of coaxium to Han as a ‘thankyou’ payment. However, we DON’T happen to see Q’ira or Lando again after Dryden Voss’s gang members everntually turn up, and get dealt with by Efyns Nest and her marauders, and we don’t really need to, as this leaves things open-ended for what they went on to do with their lives.

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TRAILERS PREVIEWED SO FAR -

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STAR WARS (released 1977/directed by George Lucas)

THE EMPIRE STRIKES BACK (released 1980/directed by Irvin Kershner)

RETURN OF THE JEDI (released 1983/directed by Richard Marquand)

STAR WARS TRILOGY 'SPECIAL EDITIONS' (released 1997)

STAR WARS: REVISITED (released 2008/fanedited by adywan)

EMPIRE: REVISITED (coming 2011/fanedited by adywan)

STAR WARS EPISODE I: THE PHANTOM MENACE (released 1999/directed by George Lucas)

STAR WARS EPISODE II: ATTACK OF THE CLONES (released 2002/directed by George Lucas)

STAR WARS EPISODE III: REVENGE OF THE SITH (released 2005/directed by George Lucas)

THE THING FROM ANOTHER WORLD (released 1951/directed by Christian Nyby)

THE THING (released 1982/directed by John Carpenter)

FORBIDDEN PLANET (released 1956/directed by Fred Wilcox)

JAWS (released 1975/directed by Steven Spielberg)

JAWS 2 (released 1978/directed by Jeannot Szwarc)

JAWS 3-D (released 1983/directed by Joe Alves)

JAWS: THE REVENGE (released 1987/directed by Joseph Sargent)

TRON (released 1982/directed by Steven Lisberger)

TRON: LEGACY (released 2010/directed by Joseph Kosinski)

LORD OF THE RINGS: THE FELLOWSHIP OF THE RING (released 2001/directed by Peter Jackson)

LORD OF THE RINGS: THE TWO TOWERS (released 2002/directed by Peter Jackson)

LORD OF THE RINGS: THE RETURN OF THE KING (released 2003/directed by Peter Jackson)

2001: A SPACE ODYSSEY (released 1968/directed by Stanley Kubrick)

2010: THE YEAR WE MAKE CONTACT (released 1984/directed by Peter Hyams)

CLOSE ENCOUNTERS OF THE THIRD KIND (released 1977/directed by Steven Spielberg)

CLOSE ENCOUNTERS OF THE THIRD KIND: SPECIAL EDITION (released 1980/directed by Steven Spielberg)

KING KONG (released 1933/directed by Merian C. Cooper)

KING KONG (released 1976/directed by John Guillemin)

KING KONG (released 2005/directed by Peter Jackson)

AVATAR (released 2009/directed by James Cameron)

AVATAR: SPECIAL EDITION (released 2010/directed by James Cameron)

MATINEE (released 1993/directed by Joe Dante)

STAR TREK: ORIGINAL SERIES (originally shown 1966-1969)

STAR TREK: THE MOTION PICTURE (released 1979/directed by Robert Wise)

STAR TREK: THE WRATH OF KHAN (released 1982/directed by Nicholas Meyer)

STAR TREK: THE SEARCH FOR SPOCK (released 1984/directed by Leonard Nimoy)

STAR TREK: THE VOYAGE HOME (released 1986/directed by Leonard Nimoy)

STAR TREK: THE FINAL FRONTIER (released 1989/directed by William Shatner)

STAR TREK: THE UNDISCOVERED COUNTRY (released 1991/directed by Nicholas Meyer)

STAR TREK: GENERATIONS (released 1994/directed by David Carson)

STAR TREK (released 2009/directed by J. J. Abrams)

THE WAR OF THE WORLDS (released 1953/directed by Byron Haskin)

WAR OF THE WORLDS (released 2005/directed by Steven Spielberg)

BACK TO THE FUTURE (released 1985/directed by Robert Zemeckis)

BACK TO THE FUTURE II (released 1989/directed by Robert Zemeckis)

BACK TO THE FUTURE III (released 1990/directed by Robert Zemeckis)

7 FACES OF DR LAO (released1964/directed by George Pal)

SUPER 8 (coming 2011/directed by J. J. Abrams)

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ROLLERBALL (released 1975/directed by Norman Jewison)

ROLLERBALL (released 2002/directed by John McTiernan)

THE ROCKETEER (released 1991/directed by Joe Johnston)

INDEPENDENCE DAY (released 1996/directed by Roland Emmerich)

ALIEN (released 1979/directed by Ridley Scott)

ALIEN: DIRECTOR'S CUT (released 2003/directed by Ridley Scott)

ALIENS (released 1986/directed by James Cameron)

ALIENS: SPECIAL EDITION (released 1992/directed by James Cameron)

ALIEN 3 (released 1992/directed by David Fincher)

ALIEN RESURRECTION (released 1997/directed by Jean-Pierre Junet)

PREDATOR (released 1987/directed by John McTiernan)

PREDATOR 2 (released 1990/directed by Stephen Hopkins)

PREDATORS (released 2010/directed by Nimrod Antal)

ALIEN VS PREDATOR (released 2004/directed by Paul W. S. Anderson)

ALIENS VS PREDATOR: REQUIEM (released 2007/directed by Colin Strause and Greg Strause)

SIN CITY (released 2005/directed by Robert Rodriguez)

RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARK (released 1981/directed by Steven Spielberg)

INDIANA JONES AND THE TEMPLE OF DOOM (released 1984/directed by Steven Spielberg)

INDIANA JONES AND THE LAST CRUSADE (released 1989/directed by Steven Spielberg)

INDIANA JONES AND THE KINGDOM OF THE CRYSTAL SKULL (released 2008/directed by Steven Spielberg)

BIG TROUBLE IN LITTLE CHINA (released 1986/directed by John Carpenter)

CAPTAIN SINDBAD (released 1963/directed by Byron Haskin)

FLASH GORDON (released 1980/directed by Mike Hodges)

LEGEND (released 1985/directed by Ridley Scott)

THE FRIGHTENERS (released 1996/directed by Peter Jackson)

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SUPERMAN: THE MOVIE (released 1978/directed by Richard Donner)

SUPERMAN II (released 1980/directed by Richard Lester/alternative cut by Richard Donner)

SUPERMAN III (released 1983/directed by Richard Lester)

SUPERMAN IV: THE QUEST FOR PEACE (released 1987/directed by Sidney J. Furie)

SUPERMAN RETURNS (released 2006/directed by Bryan Singer)

MARS ATTACKS! (released 1996/directed by Tim Burton)

THE MIST (released 2007/directed by Frank Darabont)

JUDGE DREDD (released 1995/directed by Danny Cannon)

BATMAN: THE MOVIE (released 1966/directed by Leslie H. Martinson)

BATMAN (released 1989/directed by Tim Burton)

BATMAN RETURNS (released 1992/directed by Tim Burton)

BATMAN FOREVER (released 1995/directed by Joel Shumacher)

BATMAN & ROBIN (released 1997/directed by Joel Shumacher)

BATMAN BEGINS (released 2005/directed by Christopher Nolan)

THE DARK KNIGHT (released 2008/directed by Christopher Nolan)

DEEP RISING (released 1998/directed by Stephen Sommers)

THE TERMINATOR (released 1984/directed by James Cameron)

TERMINATOR 2: JUDGMENT DAY (released 1991/directed by James Cameron)

TERMINATOR 3: RISE OF THE MACHINES (released 2003/directed by Jonathan Mostow)

TERMINATOR SALVATION (released 2009/directed by McG)

HELLBOY (released 2004/directed by Guillermo del Toro)

HELLBOY II: THE GOLDEN ARMY (released 2008/directed by Guillermo del Toro)

DUNE (released 1984/directed by David Lynch)

DUNE: THIRD STAGE EDITION (released 2008/fanedited by PhineasBg)

BLADE RUNNER (released 1982/directed by Ridley Scott)

BLADE RUNNER: DIRECTOR'S CUT (released 1992/directed by Ridley Scott)

BLADE RUNNER: THE FINAL CUT (released 2007/directed by Ridley Scott)

SKYLINE (released 2010/directed by Colin Strause and Greg Strause)

THE TROLL HUNTER (released 2010/directed by Andre Ovredal)

THE ABYSS (released 1989/directed by James Cameron)

AT THE MOUNTAINS OF MADNESS Fanedited Trailer (fanedited by Propnomicon)

300 (released 2006/directed by Zack Snyder)

JURASSIC PARK (released1993/directed by Steven Spielberg)

THE LOST WORLD: JURASSIC PARK (released 1997/directed by Steven Spielberg)

JURASSIC PARK III (released 2001/directed by Joe Johnston)

THE 7TH VOYAGE OF SINBAD (released 1958/directed by Nathan Juran)

MONSTERS (released 2010/directed by Gareth Edwards)

ROBOCOP (released 1987/directed by Paul Verhoeven)

ROBOCOP 2 (released 1990/directed by Irvin Kershner)

ROBOCOP 3 (released 1993/directed by Fred Dekker)

JASON AND THE ARGONAUTS (released 1963/directed by Don Chaffey)

E.T. THE EXTRA-TERRESTRIAL (released 1982/directed by Steven Spielberg)

E.T. THE EXTRA-TERRESTRIAL: THE 20TH ANNIVERSARY (released 2002/directed by Steven Spielberg)

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TOTAL RECALL (released 1990/directed by Paul Verhoeven)

SLEEPY HOLLOW (released 1999/directed by Tim Burton)

DRACULA (released 1931/directed by Tod Browning)

FRANKENSTEIN (released 1931/directed by James Whale)

THE MUMMY (released 1932/directed by Karl Freund)

THE WOLF MAN (released 1941/directed by George Waggner)

CREATURE FROM THE BLACK LAGOON (released 1954/directed by Jack Arnold)

THE MONSTER SQUAD (released 1987/directed by Fred Dekker)

HARRY POTTER AND THE DEATHLY HALLOWS: Part One (released 2010/directed by David Yates)

TRON: LEGACY (released 2010/directed by Joseph Kominsky)

COWBOYS & ALIENS (coming 2011/directed by Jon Favreau)

WORLD INVASION: BATTLE LOS ANGELES (released 2011/directed by Jonathan Liebesman)

SUPER 8 (coming 2011/directed by J. J. Abrams)

THE MATRIX (released 1999/directed by Andy Wachowski and Lana Wachowski)

THE MATRIX RELOADED (released 2003/directed by Andy Wachowski and Lana Wachowski)

THE MATRIX REVOLUTIONS (released 2003/directed by Andy Wachowski and Lana Wachowski)

THE ANIMATRIX (released 2003/various directors)

SPIDER-MAN (released 2002/directed by Sam Raimi)

SPIDER-MAN 2 (released 2004/directed by Sam Raimi)

SPIDER-MAN 3 (released 2007/directed by Sam Raimi)

STAR WARS (released 1977/directed by George Lucas)

STAR WARS SAGA BLU-RAY COLLECTION (coming 2011)

WATCHMEN (released 2009/directed by Zack Snyder)

PIRATES OF THE CARIBBEAN: ON STRANGER TIDES (coming 2011/directed by Rob Marshall)

GREEN LANTERN (coming 2011/directed by Martin Campbell)

CAPTAIN AMERICA (coming 2011/directed by Joe Johnston)

THOR (coming 2011/directed by Kenneth Branagh)

SKY CAPTAIN AND THE WORLD OF TOMORROW (released 2004/directed by Kerry Conran)

CONQUEST OF THE PLANET OF THE APES (released 1972/directed by J. Lee Thompson)

RISE OF THE PLANET OF THE APES (coming 2011/directed by Rupert Wyatt)

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X-MEN: FIRST CLASS (coming 2011/directed by Matthew Vaughn)

COWBOYS & ALIENS (coming 2011/directed by Jon Favreau)

TRANSFORMERS: DARK OF THE MOON (coming 2011/directed by Michael Bay)

HARRY POTTER AND THE DEATHLY HALLOWS: Part Two (coming 2011/directed by David Yates)

GREEN LANTERN (coming 2011/directed by Martin Campbell)

THE DAY THE EARTH STOOD STILL (released 1951/directed by Robert Wise)

THE DAY THE EARTH STOOD STILL (released 2008/directed by Scott Derrickson)

EMPIRE STRIKES BACK: REVISITED (coming 2011/fanedited by adywan)

THE ADVENTURES OF TINTIN: THE SECRET OF THE UNICORN (coming 2011/directed by Steven Spielberg)

RISE OF THE PLANET OF THE APES (coming 2011/directed by Rupert Wyatt)

And here's the latest trailer for this, which I'll add to it's other one on page 4, sometime -

COWBOYS & ALIENS  (released 2011/directed by Jon Favreau)

Theatrical Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zGh5lGkoWmg  NOW GONE!  Will look for replacement soon.

Little Thor

It may look a liiiiiiiiiittle familiar...

TK-949 said:

Little Thor

It may look a liiiiiiiiiittle familiar...

Nice, althought it probably should have gone in the 'Youtube finds' thread instead.  But here's the great original ad for comparison anyway - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R55e-uHQna0

TRANSFORMERS: DARK OF THE MOON  (released 2011/directed by Michael Bay)

Teaser Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6ARvEJ4TyXU

Theatrical Trailer 1 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZY_nPE2EQ80

Theatrical Trailer 2 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ed6junugq_Y  NOW GONE!  Will look for replacement soon.

(I'll add the previous TRANSFORMERS trailers/posters here too, at some point)

HARRY POTTER AND THE DEATHLY HALLOWS: Part Two  (released 2011/directed by David Yates)

Trailer 1 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mObK5XD8udk

GREEN LANTERN  (released 2011/directed by Martin Campbell)

Trailer 1 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8NWGl_A3b60

Extended TV Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7lKgX7M_lfQ

Extended 'Wondercon' Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FbyJSbimX0Y  NOW GONE!  Will look for replacement soon.

Trailer 2 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-tXTkE1HEuY  NOW GONE!  Will look for replacement soon.

Trailer 3 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XvqpNhtopTU  NOW GONE!  Will look for replacement soon.

THE DAY THE EARTH STOOD STILL  (released 1951/directed by Robert Wise)

Theatrical Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6W4_mUBWxwU

But then things went downhill, unfortunately...

THE DAY THE EARTH STOOD STILL  (released 2008/directed by Scott Derrickson)

Trailer 1 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3RAdYVCbBVQ

Trailer 2 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t88LH84m3pg

Trailer 3 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6UWZBLUdYgs  NOW GONE!  Will look for replacement soon.

Coming Soon...  Due for release in 2012...

EMPIRE STRIKES BACK: REVISITED  (coming 2012/fanedited by adywan)

Extended Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZliwkutFwV0

THE ADVENTURES OF TINTIN: THE SECRET OF THE UNICORN  (released 2011/directed by Steven Spielberg)

Teaser Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rg8uQ-L62V0  NOW GONE!  Will look for replacement soon.

Slightly different International Teaser Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mmf6IwRnHGk

RISE OF THE PLANET OF THE APES  (released 2011/directed by Rupert Wyatt)

Theatrical Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QgFXoU1Gn6Q  NOW GONE!  Will look for replacement soon.

I dunno.

Excluding the title, Rise of the Planet of the Apes doesn't really seem like a POTA film to me.

Also, the CGI looks like crap.

And here's the latest trailers for RISE OF THE PLANET OF THE APES now -

Trailer 3 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YgCzQWoBKvA

Trailer 3 (International Version) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qLq8qccEWUs

Coming Soon...  Due for release 2012...

THE AMAZING SPIDER-MAN  (coming 2012/directed by Marc Webb)

Teaser Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5TSTm-DagM  NOW GONE!  Will look for replacement soon.

JURASSIC PARK  (re-released 2011/directed by Steven Spielberg)

Theatrical Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oC2XVBQeO2k

Coming Soon...  Due for release 2012...

THE DARK KNIGHT RISES  (coming 2012/directed by Christopher Nolan)

Teaser Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ior9VaIH1x8

Theatrical Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-yh6SriAjdE

The past four posts have been remakes, re-boots, and sequels.

Is nothing original coming out anymore?

STAR WARS EPISODE I: THE PHANTOM MENACE 3D  (released 2012/directed by George Lucas)

Theatrical Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gC6w15OwK08

Kids Featurette Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T69ftWNg97U

THE THING  (released 2011/directed by Matthijs Van Heijningen Jr.)

Teaser Trailer (poor quality, but it's the only upload I could find of it) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JXUS3C697lw

Theatrical Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GYpk-Aq88w0  NOW GONE!  Will look for replacement soon.

Restricted Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5a2-A7-HKtA  NOW GONE!  Will look for replacement soon.

EVENT HORIZON  (released 1997/directed by Paul W. Anderson)

Theatrical Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OVlnER8sfxfQ  NOW GONE!  Will look for replacement soon.

GHOSTBUSTERS  (released 1984/directed by Ivan Reitman)

Teaser Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F4WAMsa_3BE

Theatrical Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cyRqR56aCKc

GHOSTBUSTERS II  (released 1989/directed by Ivan Reitman)

Theatrical Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_64lZ6m6Foc

GHOSTBUSTERS  (re-released 2011/directed by Ivan Reitman)

Re-release Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nDPObxEpmfI

Okay, time to add something new around here, so I've now included the latest 'Theatrical Trailer' for 'The Dark Knight Rises' a few posts back.

JOHN CARTER  (released 2012/directed by Andrew Stanton)

Teaser Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b8xblwyKtfo

Theatrical Trailer - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nlvYKl1fjBI