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Fixing The Last Jedi's 'COMEDY OF ERRORS' - FINISHED! Clip AVAILABLE! — Page 2

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2 for me.

Peace is a lie
There is only passion…

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1 or 2

btw. are you also inserting back some of the deleted scenes into your cut? Just curious.

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Option 2
“It’s a resistance shuttle alright, probably here to stir up some trouble officer, could come with a good bounty.”

“It’s them! The resistance agents!”

“Do I get that First Order bounty?”

Change.org: Make Disney Release JJ Abrams’s 3+ hour Cut of Rise of Skywalker: http://chng.it/9H6YSwSKnF

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MasterSolo said:

Option 2
“It’s a resistance shuttle alright, probably here to stir up some trouble officer, could come with a good bounty.”

“It’s them! The resistance agents!”

“Do I get that First Order bounty?”

Gonna replace the word ‘bounty’ with reward.

“It’s a resistance shuttle alright, probably here to stir up some trouble officer, could come with a good reward.”

“It’s them! The resistance agents!”

“Do I get that First Order reward?”

I’m happy for you to PM me the recordings now if this is the choice we’ve made!
You can decide how he should sound, I’m sure you’ll make the right choice.

SOLO - A Colour Corrected Star Wars Story
Helping Hal 9000 and tackling many projects myself so PM me with your fan-editing questions!
(My homeworld is Australia so be wary of timezones)

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Chase Adams said:

If you’re full of creative ideas OR a talented voice actor… This is the place to be!

A recurring theme in Disney’s Star Wars Episode VIII The Last Jedi is failure.
Yoda’s force ghost directly gives Luke this message in the film.

The resistance, despite only just managing to pull through at the very end, ultimately fails in keeping everyone alive and safe. Ending the film with only a handful of them left.

The sequence of events in this film has been described by the great Mr Harry Plinkett as: ‘a comedy of errors’ a form of narrative stemming from the early Shakespeare play: The Comedy of Errors.

This type of structure is when a single mistake made by a character creates a tumbling snowball effect. Meaning that it is followed by a series of endless new disasters and tragedies each with worse and worse implications.

The ultimate failure of the resistance and the countless losses of life on their behalf can be traced back to a single, poor decision made: Finn and Rose getting a parking ticket.

That’s right folks! In this installment of the Skywalker Saga the heroes lose and everyone dies because someone parked their spaceship in the wrong spot!

This bizarrely written and strangely executed turn of events can be re-shaped however. It is my intention that in my personal fanedit of TLJ (for which I will create a separate topic) I will attempt to alter this single action in a way that makes the turn of events seem somewhat less ridiculous and more like a Star Wars movie.

This can be achieved by re-dubbing the alien that gets Finn and Rose arrested.
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Slowen_Lo

I was hoping to have someone re-record his lines so that it seems as if they get arrested for a more serious and less stupid reason than a parking ticket.

I now turn to you guys and encourage any suggestions!

The question I ask is:
What should the alien tell the police Finn and Rose have done wrong that gets them arrested?

“That man is wearing a Resistance jacket.” In context, Finn is wearing Poe’s Resistance jacket. Poe gave the jacket back to Finn in a deleted scene.

The arrest for illegal parking is straight out of Spaceballs. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z88FdVp3iFk

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officer, officer those two stole all my midichlorians

heil palpatine.

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SO sorry for such a long wait without any clips guys! 😦
Especially you MasterSolo! Your contribution to this edit was incredible! 😄
I have been really busy with so many other things this year as well as work and study…
I aim to have the finished product be released either tomorrow or this weekend!
Keep in mind that I’m Australian so be aware of timezones…

SOLO - A Colour Corrected Star Wars Story
Helping Hal 9000 and tackling many projects myself so PM me with your fan-editing questions!
(My homeworld is Australia so be wary of timezones)

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Can we convince Poppasketti to incorporate it into V3 before it goes live in 24hrs?

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Chase Adams said:

stevepaynter said:

Can we convince Poppasketti to incorporate it into V3 before it goes live in 24hrs?

If you would like that, then yes.
Here it is:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/103cYP-VZokJkrt4kLr8LJzZcWiFn0YQg/view?usp=sharing

Decent idea, but I can’t get over that alien’s Barney the Dinosaur voice. You tried to make it more serious, but that voice just makes it seem even more silly. Maybe some kind of alien language with subtitles would be better?

My preferred saga experience:
TPM/AOTC/ROTS (Hal 9000), ANH/ESB/ROTJ (Despecialized), The Mandalorian,
TFA (Starlight), TLJ (Fallen Knight), TROS (Resurgence).
May the midichlorians be with you.

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Chase Adams said:

If you would like that, then yes.
Here it is:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/103cYP-VZokJkrt4kLr8LJzZcWiFn0YQg/view?usp=sharing

I REALLY like this idea, however I’m not convinced that this is the way to execute it. For one, I had to watch the clip three times to fully understand the new dialogue. Also, a major issue I have with the original scene is the accent/voice of the alien and this new version seems to double down on that. I like the idea of just switching to an alien language with subtitles… it’s been a while since we’ve had some good subtitles in a Star War 😃

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Maybe using some alien languages from the games, Kotor has some good bystander alien dialogue .

Peace is a lie
There is only passion…