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Episode I: The Ridiculous Menace (FULL MOVIE IS AVAILABLE TO STREAM, SEE FIRST POST) — Page 43

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RedFive said:

Mr. Penguino,

Is that a pair of tits above Ric and Padme's head?

Mit freundlichen Grüßen, Red

No, it's the trade federation person with the mask thingy.

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IT'S A FAAAKKKEEE!!!!

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LOL I knew what they were, but on first glance, they reaaaally look like boobies.  Not that that's a bad thing........


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How about adding ani's 'Boom!' instead of the 'yippee!'

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TV's Frink said:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LYg9WWJCH0s

This.

It was all very funny (especially the Jedi reflexes line - literally a lol), except for the shelter line.  The audio seemed too different and it isn't really funny.  Just random.

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I don't disagree, I wasn't really able to find anything I especially liked.  Alternate ideas are welcome...

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It's a little fast, but it works, and the end was really funny


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Could you slow down the cuts a bit? It goes a little fast

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No more uncomfortable silence between OBIWAN KENOBI and Panaka after discussing the weather? Or is that later?

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That's where it was supposed to go.  I watched it again this afternoon and I didn't really like how it played.  Mostly because the footage was used from other scenes and also slowed down to make it last.  The actual scene itself is one continuous shot of Panaka walking up, quick discussion, phone call, then they walk off.  So there isn't anything good to use there.

I'm not decided for sure yet, 'cause I'm not sure if mine is any better.  I'm not really a fan of the loop I used since Panaka walks backwards and then forwards again.

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Love the subtitled conversation that takes place now between Jar-Jar, Sebulba, and Anakin.

I'm with 005 -- I liked the extended Obi-Wan/Panaka silent shot (if indeed I'm remembering the right clip).

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I didn't remember that you didn't do that one. If you don't want to take their joke, the new conversation is fine also.

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Screw it -- steal anything and everything if it makes TRM funnier :)

"Excuse me, but I'm commandeering this footage in the name of ridiculousness."

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Scene's funny as is Frink, but I have to admit that stretch of silence cracks me up.  I'm all for lifting it and simply crediting this "pundle" guy in the credits.

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I'm thinking of trying a combination of my idea and pundle's.  We'll see.

 

In other very very ridiculous news...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2mqDSxpJ4cI

This leads to our introduction to C3PO.  I've got an idea for replacing his voice but I won't spoil it just yet.  In the meantime, any other ideas for his voice are welcome.

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Very, very, very,very,very,very,very,very,very,very,very,very, funny

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I laughed out loud when Qui-Gon starts telling Shmi about the parts he needs.  Anakin asking his mom if she's an angel was good too, and well-executed in terms of audio.

After Ani says, "Isn't he great?" with regards to 3PO, is there a line of dialog you could give Padme in response (something like "I don't know" or maybe cut out the "I don't" part and just have her say "no")?

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corellian77 said:

After Ani says, "Isn't he great?" with regards to 3PO, is there a line of dialog you could give Padme in response (something like "I don't know" or maybe cut out the "I don't" part and just have her say "no")?

Probably...I haven't started on that scene yet, other than putting in R2's subtitle at the very beginning.

Speaking of which, I'm not terribly happy with R2's "This should be good..." so alternate subtitle suggestions are welcome.

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TV's Frink said:

corellian77 said:

After Ani says, "Isn't he great?" with regards to 3PO, is there a line of dialog you could give Padme in response (something like "I don't know" or maybe cut out the "I don't" part and just have her say "no")?

Probably...I haven't started on that scene yet, other than putting in R2's subtitle at the very beginning.

Speaking of which, I'm not terribly happy with R2's "This should be good..." so alternate subtitle suggestions are welcome.

 

How about "Will this never end?" Which could also be considered foreshadowing since he's about to meet 3Po.

 

I also wonder if you could take Padme's "thunderous applause" and insert just those words as sort of a sarcastic response to certain things.

 

Anakin: Isn't he great?

Padme: Yeah, thunderous applause.