If ever there was a time to say 'it's so crazy, it just might work'...
Anyway, I realize it's a rough cut, but I thought I'd point these things out anyway:
- Obi Wan says "Qui-Gon would never join you," then "I will never join you." Doesn't really work.
- The music for the beginning of the arena scene needs to change, Across the Stars doesn't make sense at this point.
But you probably already know these things, so I'll just say good luck! Can't wait to find out how this will work!
I'll be rescoring the films, so the music won't be an issue later on.
I'm still working on the Obi-Wan/Dooku confrontation beacuse several shots are not long enough. But in terms of dialogue, I think going from "Qui-Gon would never join you" to "I will never join you" does work, it's just the rough editing right now.
The reason that confrontation is so short is because it refers to plot elements that wouldn't make any sense at that point. Plus, the other dialogue isn't that great anyhow.