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Dom's (Possibly) Useful TROS Edit (WIP) — Page 21

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Anyways, just hard a spark of inspiration. You know that rust colored cloth that Rey wraps the sabers in? What if it was recolored to be black, and we saw there was a bit of a hole in it. So now she’s not just burying Luke and Leia’s belongings, but Ben’s as well?

That’s a cool idea, but I don’t know how well that would telegraph.

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Oh it’d be subtle for sure, which I’m fine with

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Closing in on second workprint, probably by the end of the week. Some big new changes that I will add to the cutlist soon.

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Ooo, I’m excited to hear that! After I finish the puppets, I want to try to finally tackle the Rey Nobody stuff too. I’m interested what new things you’ve come up with!

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RogueLeader said:

Ooo, I’m excited to hear that! After I finish the puppets, I want to try to finally tackle the Rey Nobody stuff too. I’m interested what new things you’ve come up with!

Not much haha mostly implementing some of the great ideas that have been tossed around here in the past few months! I’ve been very busy with work and keeping up with the threads here is all the brain power I’ve been able to put in. But hopefully I’ll have a chance to take another fresh look at it all with the new workprint.

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Ooh, I’d certainly be interested in getting a link to that when it’s available, please.

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Hiya, same here. Interested in getting a link to that when it’s available.

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ayoo I’m always down for another Dom workprint

reylo?

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Dom, I’m really looking forward to your Rey Nobody edit. Would you use idir_
hh’s idea of Rey being the one who killed her parents or do you already have something else in mind?

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heil palpatine.

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krausfadr said:

Dom, I’m really looking forward to your Rey Nobody edit. Would you use idir_
hh’s idea of Rey being the one who killed her parents or do you already have something else in mind?

I remember that idea being floated and I’m a fan of it. I don’t recall if the details to make it work ever got properly ironed out? If so I must have missed them. Personally I couldn’t find a way to crack it. As is in my edit Palpatine still kills her parents, but here the reason given is because he supposedly saw that Rey would kill him and take the throne.

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For a Rey killed her parents storyline, the main issue to crack is you have to make Ochi’s ship be a different ship (same model) than the one her parents were in. To do this in my edit, I made the ship in her vision a different color, which some viewers thought was a mistake since it is a different color than the original vision from TFA. So the better option would be to change the color of Ochi’s ship.

To flashback to the killing of her parents I had a force lighting sound play as ship debris crashes to the desert floor. Feel free to use any ideas (or not) from my edit which is a Rey Nobody killed her parents edit. I’m not going to be updating it any further. Here’s my change list: https://krausfadr.wordpress.com/resurgence/

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Personally I could live with the ship similarity. It’s the line changes that concern me. Would definitely be interested in taking a look at your edit.

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Would it help to change the engine color? I say this understanding it would take work and i havn’t the skill. Lol.

“Because you are a PalpaWalker?”

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DominicCobb said:

  • When Rey hears the voices of the Jedi, it is Leia who says “Always,” not Luke (pulled from the trailer). Ridiculous missed opportunity.

Now that I think about it, it is kind of fucking ridiculous how they redubbed the “Always” quote at the last minute shorty after the release of the final trailer.

“The Dark Side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural.”
-Sheev Palpatine, Star Wars: Revenge of the Sith (2005)

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Yeah, they should have dubbed in Severus Snape saying “Always” from the last Harry Potter movie.

Watch Adventure Time

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There’s no evidence that Leia’s “always” was originally there in the movie, is there? Trailer audio is usually different, with lines chopped and spliced and moved around to different contexts (like “final word in the story of Skywalker”, or “No one does - but I do.”, which are also more effective IMO than the movie lines they were put together from) and often has different sound effects mixed in for impact.

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I can imagine they had Leia say it originally, but took it out over concerns that the audience would be confused since Leia wasn’t all-the-way dead yet.

You’ve got to ask yourself one question: “Am I making Carrie Fisher’s ghost proud?”
Well, are ya, punk?