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I just remembered that Rebels season 2’s ending clearly says that Vader is Anakin, so to watch everything in chronological order, that should be edited too.
It is impossible to fix everything by just working on Episode III. We should at the very least work on Episode IV and Rebels too.

Anyway… another Color Correction here.
This is the “bubble theatre” panoramic view.

ORIGINAL: https://imgur.com/a/EFzTzYn

EDITED: https://imgur.com/a/VEpYlfb

Italian faneditor.
EDITS LIST:

  1. CHOSEN ONE - A Star Wars Story: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/THE-CHOSEN-ONE-A-STAR-WARS-STORY-RELEASED/id/60721
  2. SHADOW OF THE PAST (EpI): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/SHADOW-OF-THE-PAST-A-Phantom-Menace-edit/id/65473
  3. KEEPERS OF THE PEACE (EpII): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/KEEPERS-OF-THE-PEACE-Attack-of-the-Clones-edit/id/66617/page/1#1274835
  4. THE SON OF SKYWALKER (EpIV): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-Episode-IV-The-Son-of-Skywalker/id/69085

YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsWtMZobefiq04JNuS2jFLQ?view_as=subscriber

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I love the color correcting you have done so far, it makes the film feel a bit more dark,great job!

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paja said:

Looks nice!, I wounder if someone could put in the B roll footage from TLJ into the bubble theatre scene.

“B roll footage”?
Excuse me, I’m not english mothertongue 😄

Italian faneditor.
EDITS LIST:

  1. CHOSEN ONE - A Star Wars Story: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/THE-CHOSEN-ONE-A-STAR-WARS-STORY-RELEASED/id/60721
  2. SHADOW OF THE PAST (EpI): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/SHADOW-OF-THE-PAST-A-Phantom-Menace-edit/id/65473
  3. KEEPERS OF THE PEACE (EpII): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/KEEPERS-OF-THE-PEACE-Attack-of-the-Clones-edit/id/66617/page/1#1274835
  4. THE SON OF SKYWALKER (EpIV): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-Episode-IV-The-Son-of-Skywalker/id/69085

YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsWtMZobefiq04JNuS2jFLQ?view_as=subscriber

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JeromeTheEditor said:

I love the color correcting you have done so far, it makes the film feel a bit more dark,great job!

Thank you 😉

Italian faneditor.
EDITS LIST:

  1. CHOSEN ONE - A Star Wars Story: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/THE-CHOSEN-ONE-A-STAR-WARS-STORY-RELEASED/id/60721
  2. SHADOW OF THE PAST (EpI): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/SHADOW-OF-THE-PAST-A-Phantom-Menace-edit/id/65473
  3. KEEPERS OF THE PEACE (EpII): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/KEEPERS-OF-THE-PEACE-Attack-of-the-Clones-edit/id/66617/page/1#1274835
  4. THE SON OF SKYWALKER (EpIV): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-Episode-IV-The-Son-of-Skywalker/id/69085

YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsWtMZobefiq04JNuS2jFLQ?view_as=subscriber

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IlFanEditore said:

paja said:

Looks nice!, I wounder if someone could put in the B roll footage from TLJ into the bubble theatre scene.

“B roll footage”?
Excuse me, I’m not english mothertongue 😄

Sorry i mean’t, Deleted extra Casino footage.

This is borderline experimental

WHAT WOULD M͟I͟C͟H͟A͟E͟L͟ ͟B͟A͟Y͟ DO?! …watch his step 😉

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paja said:

IlFanEditore said:

paja said:

Looks nice!, I wounder if someone could put in the B roll footage from TLJ into the bubble theatre scene.

“B roll footage”?
Excuse me, I’m not english mothertongue 😄

Sorry i mean’t, Deleted extra Casino footage.

^that’s actually a very good idea!

she/her

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IlFanEditore said:

I just remembered that Rebels season 2’s ending clearly says that Vader is Anakin, so to watch everything in chronological order, that should be edited too.
It is impossible to fix everything by just working on Episode III. We should at the very least work on Episode IV and Rebels too.

Anyway… another Color Correction here.
This is the “bubble theatre” panoramic view.

ORIGINAL: https://imgur.com/a/EFzTzYn

EDITED: https://imgur.com/a/VEpYlfb

There is no way to completely edit the movie to keep the “reveal” of Anakin from ALL of the Star Wars Movies, Shows, Comics, etc. The best you can do are the edits you are thinking of AND if you edit ANH. Essentially these kinds of edits would need to be focused on JUST the movies. So you sit down and watch them in order JUST by the movies.

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jarbear said:

IlFanEditore said:

I just remembered that Rebels season 2’s ending clearly says that Vader is Anakin, so to watch everything in chronological order, that should be edited too.
It is impossible to fix everything by just working on Episode III. We should at the very least work on Episode IV and Rebels too.

Anyway… another Color Correction here.
This is the “bubble theatre” panoramic view.

ORIGINAL: https://imgur.com/a/EFzTzYn

EDITED: https://imgur.com/a/VEpYlfb

There is no way to completely edit the movie to keep the “reveal” of Anakin from ALL of the Star Wars Movies, Shows, Comics, etc. The best you can do are the edits you are thinking of AND if you edit ANH. Essentially these kinds of edits would need to be focused on JUST the movies. So you sit down and watch them in order JUST by the movies.

I agree

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ANAKIN’S TURN.

So, here’s a new clip.

You can see the usual color correction. Apart from red colors, everything else is darkened and desaturated.
Removed Anakin’s mention of Padme.
Removed mention of Darth Vader. Anakin thanks Palpy cause he said to him that the Force was strong with him.
Re-edited montage so that Palpy only sends Anakin to Mustafar and not to the Temple.
After the scene we cut tu Utapau and Order 66.

https://vimeo.com/267447903

Italian faneditor.
EDITS LIST:

  1. CHOSEN ONE - A Star Wars Story: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/THE-CHOSEN-ONE-A-STAR-WARS-STORY-RELEASED/id/60721
  2. SHADOW OF THE PAST (EpI): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/SHADOW-OF-THE-PAST-A-Phantom-Menace-edit/id/65473
  3. KEEPERS OF THE PEACE (EpII): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/KEEPERS-OF-THE-PEACE-Attack-of-the-Clones-edit/id/66617/page/1#1274835
  4. THE SON OF SKYWALKER (EpIV): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-Episode-IV-The-Son-of-Skywalker/id/69085

YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsWtMZobefiq04JNuS2jFLQ?view_as=subscriber

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IlFanEditore said:

ANAKIN’S TURN.

So, here’s a new clip.

You can see the usual color correction. Apart from red colors, everything else is darkened and desaturated.
Removed Anakin’s mention of Padme.
Removed mention of Darth Vader. Anakin thanks Palpy cause he said to him that the Force was strong with him.
Re-edited montage so that Palpy only sends Anakin to Mustafar and not to the Temple.
After the scene we cut tu Utapau and Order 66.

https://vimeo.com/267447903

Never mind.

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LordZerome1080 said:

IlFanEditore said:

ANAKIN’S TURN.

So, here’s a new clip.

You can see the usual color correction. Apart from red colors, everything else is darkened and desaturated.
Removed Anakin’s mention of Padme.
Removed mention of Darth Vader. Anakin thanks Palpy cause he said to him that the Force was strong with him.
Re-edited montage so that Palpy only sends Anakin to Mustafar and not to the Temple.
After the scene we cut tu Utapau and Order 66.

https://vimeo.com/267447903

Never mind.

Never mind what? 😄

Italian faneditor.
EDITS LIST:

  1. CHOSEN ONE - A Star Wars Story: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/THE-CHOSEN-ONE-A-STAR-WARS-STORY-RELEASED/id/60721
  2. SHADOW OF THE PAST (EpI): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/SHADOW-OF-THE-PAST-A-Phantom-Menace-edit/id/65473
  3. KEEPERS OF THE PEACE (EpII): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/KEEPERS-OF-THE-PEACE-Attack-of-the-Clones-edit/id/66617/page/1#1274835
  4. THE SON OF SKYWALKER (EpIV): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-Episode-IV-The-Son-of-Skywalker/id/69085

YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsWtMZobefiq04JNuS2jFLQ?view_as=subscriber

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IlFanEditore said:

LordZerome1080 said:

IlFanEditore said:

ANAKIN’S TURN.

So, here’s a new clip.

You can see the usual color correction. Apart from red colors, everything else is darkened and desaturated.
Removed Anakin’s mention of Padme.
Removed mention of Darth Vader. Anakin thanks Palpy cause he said to him that the Force was strong with him.
Re-edited montage so that Palpy only sends Anakin to Mustafar and not to the Temple.
After the scene we cut tu Utapau and Order 66.

https://vimeo.com/267447903

Never mind.

Never mind what? 😄

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BIRTH OF THE EMPIRE CLIP.

I think this will be one of the last clip I’ll post before the release.

  1. As usual… color correction, especially during the Senate scenes.
  2. On Mustafar, Gunray does not call Anakin “Vader”. He simply says that they were expecting him.
  3. No Obi Wan and Yoda entering the main hall of the Temple and wondering who might have killed the younglings.
  4. Obi Wan does not see Anakin killing Jedi in the recordings. He simply sees Anakin kneeling before Palpatine. Different montage to remove Palpatine calling him “Lord Vader”.
  5. No “Consumed by Darth Vader”.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3ki4Epv868&feature=youtu.be

Italian faneditor.
EDITS LIST:

  1. CHOSEN ONE - A Star Wars Story: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/THE-CHOSEN-ONE-A-STAR-WARS-STORY-RELEASED/id/60721
  2. SHADOW OF THE PAST (EpI): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/SHADOW-OF-THE-PAST-A-Phantom-Menace-edit/id/65473
  3. KEEPERS OF THE PEACE (EpII): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/KEEPERS-OF-THE-PEACE-Attack-of-the-Clones-edit/id/66617/page/1#1274835
  4. THE SON OF SKYWALKER (EpIV): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-Episode-IV-The-Son-of-Skywalker/id/69085

YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsWtMZobefiq04JNuS2jFLQ?view_as=subscriber

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Ok, if anyone has suggestions I’m here to listen to them.

On YouTube there are, for example, some Green Screen effect, so if you have any ideas on how to add some of them I’m glad to listen.
Or maybe some musics to add…

Otherwise I think in a few days I’ll start the looooong rendering process.

Italian faneditor.
EDITS LIST:

  1. CHOSEN ONE - A Star Wars Story: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/THE-CHOSEN-ONE-A-STAR-WARS-STORY-RELEASED/id/60721
  2. SHADOW OF THE PAST (EpI): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/SHADOW-OF-THE-PAST-A-Phantom-Menace-edit/id/65473
  3. KEEPERS OF THE PEACE (EpII): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/KEEPERS-OF-THE-PEACE-Attack-of-the-Clones-edit/id/66617/page/1#1274835
  4. THE SON OF SKYWALKER (EpIV): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-Episode-IV-The-Son-of-Skywalker/id/69085

YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsWtMZobefiq04JNuS2jFLQ?view_as=subscriber

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I am curious to see it as is based on your edits!

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I just added the music from Rogue One when Jyn is brought to Yavin (the Rebel Alliance short theme) and I put it at the beginning of the first deleted scene (Bail, Mon, Padme and others talking about how to oppose Palpatine by creating what will evetually become the real Rebel Alliance).

I’m thinking that I could make a trailer, considering that this is what I do on my YT channel.

Italian faneditor.
EDITS LIST:

  1. CHOSEN ONE - A Star Wars Story: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/THE-CHOSEN-ONE-A-STAR-WARS-STORY-RELEASED/id/60721
  2. SHADOW OF THE PAST (EpI): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/SHADOW-OF-THE-PAST-A-Phantom-Menace-edit/id/65473
  3. KEEPERS OF THE PEACE (EpII): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/KEEPERS-OF-THE-PEACE-Attack-of-the-Clones-edit/id/66617/page/1#1274835
  4. THE SON OF SKYWALKER (EpIV): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-Episode-IV-The-Son-of-Skywalker/id/69085

YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsWtMZobefiq04JNuS2jFLQ?view_as=subscriber

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DELETED SCENE CLIP SOON.

Italian faneditor.
EDITS LIST:

  1. CHOSEN ONE - A Star Wars Story: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/THE-CHOSEN-ONE-A-STAR-WARS-STORY-RELEASED/id/60721
  2. SHADOW OF THE PAST (EpI): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/SHADOW-OF-THE-PAST-A-Phantom-Menace-edit/id/65473
  3. KEEPERS OF THE PEACE (EpII): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/KEEPERS-OF-THE-PEACE-Attack-of-the-Clones-edit/id/66617/page/1#1274835
  4. THE SON OF SKYWALKER (EpIV): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-Episode-IV-The-Son-of-Skywalker/id/69085

YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsWtMZobefiq04JNuS2jFLQ?view_as=subscriber

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FIRST DELETED SCENE.

Just to show you the music I added from Rogue One.
IMHO they fit pretty well, both the positioning of the deleted scene (showing the Anakin/Padme scene just after the deleted one shows that Padme completely trusts Anakin) and the music that sends you signs about the birth of the Rebellion.

PS: In these days I thought about some things. One was a further edit, but I think it is impossible to do.
I was wondering is it is possible to place the entire Order 66 AFTER Anakin’s “death”.
Anakin is sent to Mustafar, the Empire is born, Kenobi and Yoda go to the Temple and discover the truth and the two duels happen. But during all of this the Clone Wars continue, and after the Darth Vader scene we see all the Order 66.
Some new scenes would be needed, some new dialogue (to explain why Kenobi goes away from Utapau before the battle is over, for example), but of course it would greatly improve continuity. I don’t think it is plausible, and surely now I wouldn’t have the time to do it, but I think it would be a cool edit idea.

The other thing was to make a new prequel mashup, but to try making it in a more Rogueoneish way. A real spinoff, so that we wouldn’t need to hide any plot points. The main story is the Original Trilogy, and the Prequels just become a spinoff like Rogue One or Solo.
We could put an intro like in RO, then use Revenge of the Sith as a base, and then put flashbacks during Anakin’s dreams.

https://vimeo.com/268181054

Italian faneditor.
EDITS LIST:

  1. CHOSEN ONE - A Star Wars Story: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/THE-CHOSEN-ONE-A-STAR-WARS-STORY-RELEASED/id/60721
  2. SHADOW OF THE PAST (EpI): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/SHADOW-OF-THE-PAST-A-Phantom-Menace-edit/id/65473
  3. KEEPERS OF THE PEACE (EpII): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/KEEPERS-OF-THE-PEACE-Attack-of-the-Clones-edit/id/66617/page/1#1274835
  4. THE SON OF SKYWALKER (EpIV): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-Episode-IV-The-Son-of-Skywalker/id/69085

YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsWtMZobefiq04JNuS2jFLQ?view_as=subscriber

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IlFanEditore said:

FIRST DELETED SCENE.

Just to show you the music I added from Rogue One.
IMHO they fit pretty well, both the positioning of the deleted scene (showing the Anakin/Padme scene just after the deleted one shows that Padme completely trusts Anakin) and the music that sends you signs about the birth of the Rebellion.

PS: In these days I thought about some things. One was a further edit, but I think it is impossible to do.
I was wondering is it is possible to place the entire Order 66 AFTER Anakin’s “death”.
Anakin is sent to Mustafar, the Empire is born, Kenobi and Yoda go to the Temple and discover the truth and the two duels happen. But during all of this the Clone Wars continue, and after the Darth Vader scene we see all the Order 66.
Some new scenes would be needed, some new dialogue (to explain why Kenobi goes away from Utapau before the battle is over, for example), but of course it would greatly improve continuity. I don’t think it is plausible, and surely now I wouldn’t have the time to do it, but I think it would be a cool edit idea.

The other thing was to make a new prequel mashup, but to try making it in a more Rogueoneish way. A real spinoff, so that we wouldn’t need to hide any plot points. The main story is the Original Trilogy, and the Prequels just become a spinoff like Rogue One or Solo.
We could put an intro like in RO, then use Revenge of the Sith as a base, and then put flashbacks during Anakin’s dreams.

https://vimeo.com/268181054

You can count on my voices and encouragement if you decide to do either of the two. 😃.

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LordZerome1080 said:

IlFanEditore said:

FIRST DELETED SCENE.

Just to show you the music I added from Rogue One.
IMHO they fit pretty well, both the positioning of the deleted scene (showing the Anakin/Padme scene just after the deleted one shows that Padme completely trusts Anakin) and the music that sends you signs about the birth of the Rebellion.

PS: In these days I thought about some things. One was a further edit, but I think it is impossible to do.
I was wondering is it is possible to place the entire Order 66 AFTER Anakin’s “death”.
Anakin is sent to Mustafar, the Empire is born, Kenobi and Yoda go to the Temple and discover the truth and the two duels happen. But during all of this the Clone Wars continue, and after the Darth Vader scene we see all the Order 66.
Some new scenes would be needed, some new dialogue (to explain why Kenobi goes away from Utapau before the battle is over, for example), but of course it would greatly improve continuity. I don’t think it is plausible, and surely now I wouldn’t have the time to do it, but I think it would be a cool edit idea.

The other thing was to make a new prequel mashup, but to try making it in a more Rogueoneish way. A real spinoff, so that we wouldn’t need to hide any plot points. The main story is the Original Trilogy, and the Prequels just become a spinoff like Rogue One or Solo.
We could put an intro like in RO, then use Revenge of the Sith as a base, and then put flashbacks during Anakin’s dreams.

https://vimeo.com/268181054

You can count on my voices and encouragement if you decide to do either of the two. 😃.

I thought so, ahahaha! Thank you 😉

Italian faneditor.
EDITS LIST:

  1. CHOSEN ONE - A Star Wars Story: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/THE-CHOSEN-ONE-A-STAR-WARS-STORY-RELEASED/id/60721
  2. SHADOW OF THE PAST (EpI): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/SHADOW-OF-THE-PAST-A-Phantom-Menace-edit/id/65473
  3. KEEPERS OF THE PEACE (EpII): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/KEEPERS-OF-THE-PEACE-Attack-of-the-Clones-edit/id/66617/page/1#1274835
  4. THE SON OF SKYWALKER (EpIV): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-Episode-IV-The-Son-of-Skywalker/id/69085

YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsWtMZobefiq04JNuS2jFLQ?view_as=subscriber

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I finished it and rendered it. Something like 9 hours O.O

Just some things:

  1. Eventually I didn’t put any voiceover. I tried and tried with volumes, but it just sounded too different from real Palpatine’s voice.

  2. In the end, I didn’t put the Tantive IV opening shot before Yoda, Bail and Obi talk about Luke.

  3. In the credits I put a simple credit about the edit… but it looks bad because of the background text. You’ll understand it when you see it. It is a really minor error, I surely won’t repeat the rendering for that.

  4. Now I have to choose where to upload it. It is an over 8gb MP4 file, so any suggestions are welcomed.

  5. I think it came out the way I wanted. It doesn’t fix everything, but at least it makes way less obvious that DV is Anakin. I’m satisfied with the color correction and with the cuts. The deleted scenes look a little less detailed, but I think they are acceptable.

I don’t know if I will upload it tomorrow or in the following days, but as soon as it is online you’ll know it.
I want to say a really huge “Grazie” to everyone who commented and suggested things.
If I’m inspired I think I will start working on the PT mashup… maybe called “Chosen One - A Star Wars story”.

Italian faneditor.
EDITS LIST:

  1. CHOSEN ONE - A Star Wars Story: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/THE-CHOSEN-ONE-A-STAR-WARS-STORY-RELEASED/id/60721
  2. SHADOW OF THE PAST (EpI): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/SHADOW-OF-THE-PAST-A-Phantom-Menace-edit/id/65473
  3. KEEPERS OF THE PEACE (EpII): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/KEEPERS-OF-THE-PEACE-Attack-of-the-Clones-edit/id/66617/page/1#1274835
  4. THE SON OF SKYWALKER (EpIV): https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Star-Wars-Episode-IV-The-Son-of-Skywalker/id/69085

YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsWtMZobefiq04JNuS2jFLQ?view_as=subscriber