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It looks good, looking forward to your edit!

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JeromeTheEditor said:

It looks good, looking forward to your edit!

Thank you very much!

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Yeah, if fact the concept was extremely effective. I will try again.

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RAIN PREVIEW.

This is what it looks like. (audio is still to be worked on)
I think you understand my skepticism.
I masked Padme every single frame. In fact, I dont think you notice it that much.
But the cutting around the background floor and the column is pretty mich visible, and I don’t know how to fix it.

I’d like to know your first impression.
If you think it is acceptable, then I continue and cut Obi and Padme even in the following scene. Then I slowly dissolve rain before Kenobi leaves.

Otherwise it will go only with darker setting and without rain.

Password: obipadme2

https://vimeo.com/266010371

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I like this idea man. I see what you’re saying about the rain though. I kind of think this particular rain effect just doesn’t work for some reason. Maybe another would, or messing with the opacity of the effect.

If the rain doesn’t work, maybe you could just add distant sounds of thunder instead.
I think the color grading looks cool, though the horizon does seem a little bright. I think that kind of gives the effect away a little bit since you can’t really do much about the sky being clear despite how stormy the mood feels now.

Totally my opinion, but I think adding thunder sounds, and maybe trying to darken the sky somehow, might be more effective than adding rain in the background.

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RogueLeader said:

I like this idea man. I see what you’re saying about the rain though. I kind of think this particular rain effect just doesn’t work for some reason. Maybe another would, or messing with the opacity of the effect.

If the rain doesn’t work, maybe you could just add distant sounds of thunder instead.
I think the color grading looks cool, though the horizon does seem a little bright. I think that kind of gives the effect away a little bit since you can’t really do much about the sky being clear despite how stormy the mood feels now.

Totally my opinion, but I think adding thunder sounds, and maybe trying to darken the sky somehow, might be more effective than adding rain in the background.

Thank you very much for the suggestions 😉 I’ll see if I can manage to improve the rain effect. Otherwise I’ll try something else.

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Lol, if anyone has any suggestion on how to improve the scene I’m glad to hear it.
If I change settings on the rain green screen, rain disappears.
Tha masking on the column remains too much visible, probably because of the double effect (darkening and rain behind).
I don’t know how to darken the sky, cause it has the same problems of the rain.

I can leave it the way it is, with the simple darkening effect.
Or I can add the storm sound, but then when we see the sky, it is not a stormy sky.

I think for the time being I will pass to other scenes, lol.

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KENOBI-PADME scene update.

I kept trying. I tried with other rain effects, with color correction, brightness, contrast, etc. But it still remains too much visible, and even if I change settings in a considerable way there is the problem of the CGI in background that becomes a punch in the face.
The only solution would be a completely new background, but I don’t have any instrument nor capability to do it. I’m not Adywan 😄

This is the last test. I gave a blueish tone. It seems the scene is set right before dawn or sunset.
Now you simply have to choose between the two.

ORIGINAL CC: https://vimeo.com/265956100
Password: obipadme

NEW DARK BLUE CC: https://vimeo.com/266481575
Password: obipadme2

After this I’ll give you the Darth Vader presentation shot. You’ll have to choose between two different musics, one being an Imperial March remix and the other being the “Hope” track from Rogue One.

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I like the original one a little bit better, but I wouldn’t mind if you used the new dark blue.

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JeromeTheEditor said:

I like the original one a little bit better, but I wouldn’t mind if you used the new dark blue.

Yeah, I prefer it too.
I would have loved putting some stormy effects, but at least for now I’m not able to do it.

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DARTH VADER COLOR CORRECTION.

https://imgur.com/a/r3ImPRc Original

https://imgur.com/a/hCDNIWD Edited

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looks like a actual Star wars film!

Working on many edits, may take many years to complete…

Also known as Mr. Jung.

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Thank you both!

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DARTH VADER CLIP.

Now I’ll link two videos about the final Darth Vader presentation, with only different musics.
I prefer the second one, but I’ll listen to you 😄

You will see:

  1. The color correction.
  2. The cut from Padme’s scene, where we don’t hear the childrens’ names nor her death.
  3. No Darth Vader talking about Padme. He uses the Force and crushes things simply to show his power.
  4. No “NOOOOOOO!”, we cut to the Star Destroyer’s scene.

In the SECOND video, the one I prefer, the scene continues to my concept for the ending.
Don’t mind the missing final audio.
I think it is nice to see the scenes of Luke/Leia while Yoda is speaking.

First music: https://vimeo.com/266521610

Second music (+ending): https://streamable.com/wesxh

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IlFanEditore said:

DARTH VADER CLIP.

Now I’ll link two videos about the final Darth Vader presentation, with only different musics.
I prefer the second one, but I’ll listen to you 😄

You will see:

  1. The color correction.
  2. The cut from Padme’s scene, where we don’t hear the childrens’ names nor her death.
  3. No Darth Vader talking about Padme. He uses the Force and crushes things simply to show his power.
  4. No “NOOOOOOO!”, we cut to the Star Destroyer’s scene.

In the SECOND video, the one I prefer, the scene continues to my concept for the ending.
Don’t mind the missing final audio.
I think it is nice to see the scenes of Luke/Leia while Yoda is speaking.

First music: https://vimeo.com/266521610

Second music (+ending): https://streamable.com/wesxh

Pasword?

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LordZerome1080 said:

IlFanEditore said:

DARTH VADER CLIP.

Now I’ll link two videos about the final Darth Vader presentation, with only different musics.
I prefer the second one, but I’ll listen to you 😄

You will see:

  1. The color correction.
  2. The cut from Padme’s scene, where we don’t hear the childrens’ names nor her death.
  3. No Darth Vader talking about Padme. He uses the Force and crushes things simply to show his power.
  4. No “NOOOOOOO!”, we cut to the Star Destroyer’s scene.

In the SECOND video, the one I prefer, the scene continues to my concept for the ending.
Don’t mind the missing final audio.
I think it is nice to see the scenes of Luke/Leia while Yoda is speaking.

First music: https://vimeo.com/266521610

Second music (+ending): https://streamable.com/wesxh

Pasword?

Sorry. Password for the first video is: dvbirth1

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LordZerome1080 said:

The music is superb!! Please do tell where you got it from.

The first one from here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U2Z04NAa65w

The second one from here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RaEzKRngCyY

Which one do you prefer?
The first one is nice, but I’m not completely satisfied about how I have to dissolve it and put the Imperial March part at the end (when DV and Palpy look at the Death Star).

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I also prefer the second one, the only thing is that the volume is to loud when the emperor says “a powerful sith you will become” so it’s a bit hard to hear, but other than that it is good!

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IlFanEditore said:

LordZerome1080 said:

The music is superb!! Please do tell where you got it from.

The first one from here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U2Z04NAa65w

The second one from here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RaEzKRngCyY

Which one do you prefer?
The first one is nice, but I’m not completely satisfied about how I have to dissolve it and put the Imperial March part at the end (when DV and Palpy look at the Death Star).

I actually love the transition. Keep it as is.

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JeromeTheEditor said:

I also prefer the second one, the only thing is that the volume is to loud when the emperor says “a powerful sith you will become” so it’s a bit hard to hear, but other than that it is good!

Yes Yes, I know. In fact at the end I Will fix all the audio problema 😉

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LordZerome1080 said:

IlFanEditore said:

LordZerome1080 said:

The music is superb!! Please do tell where you got it from.

The first one from here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U2Z04NAa65w

The second one from here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RaEzKRngCyY

Which one do you prefer?
The first one is nice, but I’m not completely satisfied about how I have to dissolve it and put the Imperial March part at the end (when DV and Palpy look at the Death Star).

I actually love the transition. Keep it as is.

Thank you. I’m going to keep both versions until the final rendering. Then I’ll choose.

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FIRST ANAKIN’S DREAM.

As I said, there is the cut from Grievous and Palpatine scene (where Palpy does not say that he is going to have a new apprentice) and then the panoramic city view of Coruscant.
No balcony scene, we cut to Anakin’s dream, where there are scenes on background about Shmi and Dooku’s death and Palpatine voice.

Anakin must have an “Odi et Amo” relationship with power itself, not just fear for Padme’s loss.

https://streamable.com/o5v94

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