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Another Fan-Fic (My sincerest apologies to starkiller) - SW crossover

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This is a SW-Modern Earth crossover that I’m working on, I don’t like to preface or brag, so I’m going just going to start by posting a chapter, and letting it explain itself.

<u>A Series of Unfortunate Coincidences, Chapter One:</u>
The time for the jump was NOW, there could be no more delays, this entire operation required that they jump into hyperspace and hit Endor when the ground-pounders had the shield down. Lando knew that the shield would be down, it HAD to be, they needed to buy those troops time, or else it will be all over when they arrive.

“Admiral, we’re in position. All fighters accounted for.” He said into the com-system, waiting for an answer.

“Proceed with the countdown. All groups assume attack co-ordinates” came a static-infested reply on the radio. It was time. Rather than having each fighter calculate their own hyperspace jump, the Falcon would made the calculation and have all the other ships use it.

Han you better not have bullshitted me about the Kessel Run, or we’re cooked. Lando thought to himself as the hyperspace co-ordinate came flashing through.

Lando heard his first mate mumble something about how the attack might fail miserable, and his concerns with the jump. “Don’t worry, my friend’s down there, he’ll have the shield down on time” he calmly re-assured his first mate of “Or this will be the shortest offensive of all time” He said to himself, casting his own self-doubt about this long-shot assault.

“All craft, prepare to jump into hyperspace on my mark” Came the command over the radio, Lando readied the hyperdrive.

Now is when we find out how well these co-ordinate work.

Instantly the rebel armada, and the largest collection of rebel warships went streaking into hyperspace, hoping to emerge at Endor right on time.

Han Solo had finally caught some luck, something that had always seemed to flow to him constantly, until Luke showed up. It was sheer luck that your prissy protocol droid would be revered as a god by the natives, luck they would find a back door, and luck that there would only be four guards on duty. The native had been dumb enough to try to hijack a speeder bike, and let three of them away from the bunker. Only one left, not a problem, just don’t let him sound the alarm. As good as he was, C-3PO was a hindrance, and a walking target, best left behind. With the last trooper disarmed, this operation would be a cake-walk.

Empty. This wasn’t adding up anymore, either Han was extremely lucky right now, or he was leading his men into a trap. He hoped it was the first one, Chewbacca moaned with disgust, this wasn’t adding up, but he had to get the shield down on time.

A single elevator rumbled to the top of the Emperor’s tower, overlooking the moon, and fleet gathered, waiting. The weary, and aged face of the Emperor slowly turned around a met with Luke, with a piercing gaze that looked straight through his soul.

“Welcome young Skywalker, I have expecting you.” These words shot straight through him. The powerful Sith Lord, who overthrew the Old Republic, and had led them to victory in the clone wars, and foiled a “plot” by the Jedi to take over, was not nearly as menacing as he seemed.

“You no longer need those.” As he said those words, the binders on his arms unhooked and fell off. And with another three words, the crimson imperial guards immediately left the room, oblivious to fate.
He held strong against the taunting of the emperor, hoping on the careful timing of the fleet.

“You’re wrong, soon I’ll be dead, and you with me.” His words cut the darkness with a small shimmer of light.

“Perhaps you refer to the imminent attack of your rebel fleet” laughed the Emperor in disgust, his words cutting more deeply, extinguishing the small hope of light in the room. “Yes, I assure you that they have found themselves lost, and that they are stranded in another galaxy, and will not be able to arrive here in time to stop me.” He knew the Emperor was lying, he had to be, the fleet will arrive, the shield will be down, it all HAD to be. But it wasn’t.

President Henderson looked out on the White House lawn with despair. So many presidents were here, all of them greater than I ever will be. The thought raced through his head, he longed to lead his country to victory, but he could barely have his own victory, by all counts, he shouldn’t have won the last election, but he did, and he would pay dearly for it. Even though his predecessor came to power by the courts in a far closer race than what he would have, the public still hated him, he wished he could be a war president, like his successor, and be revered as a hero, but these delusions would never happen. If only he had a battle to win.

Questions, Comments, Concerns, Flames? I’m welcome to feedback.

Catapultam habeo. Nisi pecuniam omnem mihi dabris, ad caput tuum saxum immane mittam.

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I think I see where you're going with this. Interesting idea.

No need to apologize.
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So far it's not bad. A few grammar mistakes and it jumps around--which means you assume very intimate familiarity with the end of Return of the Jedi. And at least there is no Uber-Gary-Stu like in Starkiller's fic (No offense man )

Funny. I guess naming first chapters after plays on "A Series of Unfortunate Events" is rather common; See what I mean?

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shut up, it was only a few mistakes and u shout at 'em.
"A Jedi can feel the force flow through him".
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Ignore him Chalts, he seems to have some kind of 'issue'.

War does not make one great.

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Originally posted by: Yoda Is Your Father
Ignore him Chalts, he seems to have some kind of 'issue'.


Shut your mouth u twat.
"A Jedi can feel the force flow through him".
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Originally posted by: Yoda Is Your Father
Ignore him Chalts, he seems to have some kind of 'issue'.


Shut your mouth u twat.


I see your point, Yoda.

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Jedikev, shut... your... face...

I ASKED for feedback, no need to flame off anybody who critiques me.

Catapultam habeo. Nisi pecuniam omnem mihi dabris, ad caput tuum saxum immane mittam.

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I'm doing 2 fics at once, this is the start of the other one I'm writing.

The following information was recovered from private letters Imperial officers and soldiers on the Death Star, they are presented here in their entirety as they were originally written.


Dear Derek,

It seems like one captured freighter can ruin your entire day. It's been a few weeks since I was transferred to the Death Star. I can see why The Emperor calls it "The Jewel of the Imperial Navy", this place is massive. I was lucky enough to be on-hand when we tested it on Alderaan. Damn, that was an impressive show. I holo'd it onto a disc, it was incredible. A few hours later, some freighter entered into the system. We picked it up, I felt something funny when I was doing hangar control that day. I walked out afterwards to get a caff, and came back to a locked door after seeing 2 stormtroopers taking a wookie prisoner out, don't ask, don't tell.

I heard that you went AWOL from the Imperial Academy, I hope this isn't true. If it is, please come back, you know how much mother misses you, when the officer told her about it, the news broke her heart. You need to come back, everybody misses you so much, nothing is trhe same without you anymore. I really wanted to see you and serve alongside of my brother "Hobbie", you would have been a great TIE Pilot.

Your Brother,
James Klivan, Traffic Control Officer Hanger Bay 327.




Dear Mother,

I'm having a great time serving on the Death Star, I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw it from the shuttle, it's even bigger than the Holo's make it out to be. Our deck officer is very nice, and he let us watch the testing of the superlaser on Alderaan, I couldn't believe how powerful it is. I'm sure glad to be on the right side. Admiral Motti was right about us being the ultimate power in the universe. We ran into a bit of trouble with a captured freighter, but they're gone now, and we are off to blow up the hidden rebel base. I was patrolling in the hangar bay when I got to see Darth Vader fighting an old guy with a lightsaber, it was really cool, and Vader killed the old guy, and then that freighter managed to leave right after that.

After we destroy the rebel base, I get planet leave for a month, and I'll be home in time for my birthday. I hope you'll get a really big cake with candles just for me, your little soldier boy, just like you always wanted. I called the bank on Coruscant, and I finally have enough in my savings for the LandSpeeder I've always wanted, when I got back. It makes me happy thinking about it.

Your Son,
Katu Halek, TK-648, 302nd Stormtrooper Battalion.



My Dearest Wife Halda,

It's been too long since I've last written you, and I miss you every day. I hear that little Han is walking now, It really warms my heart to hear how my son is doing. I can't wait to see him, I feel like I don't even know him anymore, I wonder if he'll even recognize me anymore. I've finally gotten my wings from pilots school, and I've gotten my fighter. She flies like a dream, and just as smooth as in the simulators on Corellia. The station is going to head to Alderaan next, and I hope to get shore leave as soon as I can so that I can visit you and Han. I've heard of the station's destructive power that Tarkin promises, he says that the superlaser can destroy a planet. I have my doubts, but it's entirely possible, given at how powerful it is.

I've been assigned to patrol the system for any craft heading in-system, I have to report any unauthorized craft that come too close to the station, where they pull them in and inspect them, relatively simple stuff, I also have to take my group out to immobilize any ship that tries to escape the station without the right clearance.

Your Husband,
Jeb Andor, 78th Fighter Wing.

Catapultam habeo. Nisi pecuniam omnem mihi dabris, ad caput tuum saxum immane mittam.

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Jedikev, shut... your... face...

I ASKED for feedback, no need to flame off anybody who critiques me.




What? and to think i actually stood up for you....oh well.
"A Jedi can feel the force flow through him".
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Stood up for him? Who was picking on him?!


Skyman: Those letters were awesome! I hope Jeb Andor makes it off before the explosion.

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You!

and to be honest na..... Chalts is even worth a flame or an insult.
"A Jedi can feel the force flow through him".
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That's it. I give up. There is no use in talking to you. I shall ignore all future posts by Jedikev, until he matures.

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Kev, out. I asked for feedback, you turned around and flamed Chaltab for being honest.

You weren't "sticking up for me" at all, you were blindly defending me.

Catapultam habeo. Nisi pecuniam omnem mihi dabris, ad caput tuum saxum immane mittam.

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there there just everyone say sorry and you can go back to your story.
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I really got a kick out of those letters. If there is one project you'll be working on before the other, I'd work on the one with the letters.

Episode II: Shroud of the Dark Side

Emperor Jar-Jar
“Back when we made Star Wars, we just couldn’t make Palpatine as evil as we intended. Now, thanks to the miracles of technology, it is finally possible. Finally, I’ve created the movies that I originally imagined.” -George Lucas on the 2007 Extra Extra Special HD-DVD Edition

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Right i'm sorry. Shimraa's the only one that's good, thanks.

"A Jedi can feel the force flow through him".
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np buddy as one of ht elong time posters i need to stop fights like this. from starting.
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Ok, this makes post 20 in the thread, which means that it will roll over at the next post, or this one. I'm not sure which (Only if you use the default forum setting, of course.)

Let us forget the previous 20 non-skyman posts ever happened.

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good plan so whats yourstory about
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I'm not currently working on any SW fics. I have two in the Danny Phantom universe and one Teen Titans, as well as one based on the general idea of Crossovers in general, which will include some Star Wars elements and planets, but right now it just has Hyrule/Zelda. I can link you to it if you want. But since this is Skyman's thread I will make my own thread or PM you the link.

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ummm... i was refering to high man as a joke cause i only came in here to resolve the fight.
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never mind, everyone ingnor the last 23 posts in this thread and lets get going