Too many things to comment on at the moment!
I think skipping “Leia knew it too” is the way to go.
I’d happily remove Klaud if those two shots can be worked on to remove him.
I’ll try again to remove the lightspeed skipping dialogue.
I’ll try a quick cross fade as Finn senses Rey dying. Good idea!
I plan to include lines for the Knights of Ren from the other thread, but probably just a couple.