• Reduce the diss battle between Kylo and Lor San Tekka
• Reduce Poe being cocky with Kylo
• Remove Kylo’s line "Comfortable?"
• Remove Rey’s “No” when Finn asks if she’s flown the Falcon (DigMod)
(• Tone down childish celebrating)
• Remove part of Finn’s line “… cute boyfriend?”
• Remove Finn climbing on Rey making her angry (idea by DigMod)
• Remove Snoke mentioning Han Solo being Kylo’s father
(• Reduce Han playing around with Chewie’s Bowcaster)
(• Remove Han’s line “I saw our son" and/or “he was here”)
(• Changes to the talk about Kylo between Han and Leia)
• Add deleted scene of Kylo searching the Falcon
(• Cut the “I’m in charge now!” part when Han and Finn encounter Phasma)
(• Cut Finn’s “trash compactor” reference)
(• Trim “map puzzle” scene, make it faster)
After watching Hal’s v3, I certainly am fine with all the changes you want to make in addition of Hal’s. The Han/Leia scenes are very… awkward (especially the scene when they mention Snoke, Luke and their son, with all the meta jokes “and don’t say the death star” and the non sense “that’s why I wanted Luke to train him” - I didn’t know there was more Jedi Masters after ROTJ to train new Jedi 😕 - ., I felt so embarrassed during this scene…).
However, I would suggest you to keep Ren’s “Grand father”. It’s nice to uderstand the relationship at this point of the movie.