Ok guys, need a favor. There isn’t much new here, and it’s a long clip, but it’s important because it shows the inter-cutting between the death of Padme and birth of Vader. Need to know if it’s working.
There are a few minor changes, mainly I cut down some of the Robo footage, as well as adding one joke during it. There’s also a new scene at the end for your trouble.
Right at 5:00, I don’t understand what Vader is supposed to be saying “Good. I am…”
Also, is this the same “Alter the deal” take as before?
Overall, it is coming together great.
Note: If you want to cut down Robo parts any more, you could cut out the whole wipe memory part (unless this is integral to how you play off Vader down the line), and you could snip off the “what do you think Johnson?” portion of the “He signed a release form” part (it is a bit jumbled in the transition anyway).