Wow, what an improvement. Thanks so much for letting me check out your edit===it blows away the original cut.
Thanks for the kind words and the thorough feedback, very helpful indeed.
I can’t remember it clearly but are you using the ultimate edition shots of Empty streets, shops, buildings at the end? Thanks again! 😃
Yup, I am still using those Ultimate Edition shots. But, as per a great suggestion by one69chev, I might trim the priest and the bit about who’s footing the bill for a more streamlined funeral scene.
And if you wanted to put some key revised scenes on Vimeo I could begin previewing.
Not a big Vimeo user, but here are some clips on YouTube that show off some of the more radical changes! 😃
New Opening Montage: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wO4xH1457pc
Clark Warns Lois (About Going to the Desert): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g5UNwNEr1ao
Altered Desert Sequence: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=My499dvJUmU&feature=youtu.be
No Feeding Senators: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zr26NwHQ2rc
Coitus to Coitus Cut (A problematic bit tweaked from the workprint): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fDsmAwDAcgw
Too Much Knowledge (Lex Gets Info on Kryptonian Ship): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vcV1yRcQL0g
No Talk About Parents Pre-“Martha” During Fight (as per a suggestion on fanedit.org): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9yWzHOX9Wc8
Trimmed Doomsday Fight: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uf31MyOGsVE
A Simpler End: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I1gU7xVMcUA
Some of these clips have been adjusted from the past workprint, particularly the “Too Much Knowledge” bit, which no longer has a scream. Love to hear any and all thoughts, and, of course, it’s not too late to request the workprint! 😄