So, I have remixed the order of events so that everything doesn’t feel as separate. I also managed to make it seem like Barbara is getting too invested in the case which is why Batman dismisses her. I am currently rendering a first draft to see if it works or not. If it looks pretty damn good, I’ll send it to the spleen, if not, well, I’ll keep fine tuning it…
Post #976300
- Author
- Deloreanhunter12
- Parent topic
- The Killing Joke: Film Edition (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/976300/action/topic#976300
- Date created
- 28-Jul-2016, 12:27 AM