So, uh, something that may or may not have been overlooked, is how at the end, the planet implodes, and I always thought that it ends up looking like a star because it absorbed a star. Now, since you made it fire, shouldn’t it not do that? I always felt that satisfaction at the end, but now it seems like there’s a bunch of energy that just comes from nowhere.
Also, Poe’s “our job’s done here” seems a bit weird now, because they failed to prevent their DC from being nuked. Just a thought…
Good job on the edits, though, Hal and others!