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Post #970694

Author
yhwx
Parent topic
Musical Obsessions
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Date created
17-Jul-2016, 10:20 AM

DuracellEnergizer said:

After much consideration, I’ve decided to become a musician – specifically an avant-garde musician, one who’ll specialize in music that’ll alienate all but a select few people.

I’m planning on eventually doing some original works, but so far I’ve created two sound collages out of pre-existing songs (I’d say mashups, but, well, they’re nowhere near that flawlessly crafted):

So, what do y’all think? Do I have what it takes to invert music as we know it?

Here are my thoughts:

  • In the first one, you cut too much between the two songs, creating an unnatural effect. When it sounded to me that you were playing the two songs at once, the rhymes of the two songs just didn’t match up. I might give this one a 4/10.
  • I really quite liked the second. I have no major complaints with this one, only a couple of compliments. I like how you seemed to reverse the audio, and you blended the two vocalists well. This amount to a very nice effect. I might give this one a 8/10.
  • In conclusion, these are good starting points, but there is room to improve.
  • Album art: Looks like it was done in Microsoft Paint. Please scrap it. 3/10.