It’s just a little to on-the-nose for me. I would prefer if it went something like
“This is a rebellion, isn’t it? That’s what I’m doing.”
I think “This is a rebellion, isn’t it? That’s exactly what I’m doing.” would have been better
Yeah, for sure.
But back to the overall topic at hand. You can’t gauge the quality of the script based on a line or two. Overly opinionated teenagers on youtube be damned.
Correct. There are plenty of lines in a supposedly well written movie like A New Hope that seem clunky on paper but context and good delivery sold them.