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NeverarGreat
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STAR WARS: EP V "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - 12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW
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11-Jul-2016, 12:20 AM

Bingowings said:

ray_afraid said:

Yesss… I know that was brought up years ago. I hope it’s been fixed.

Replacing the conjunction with a pause would have a similar effect. I quite like the line as is. It makes it sound like Lando is desperate to convince and nervousness has broken through the cool. But I wouldn’t rage quit the edit if it was smoothed out.

It’s not a big thing to leave it in, but to me it sounds like he’s trying to remember his lines instead of trying to cover up his nervousness.