Just a minor nitpick: you should have written “hadn’t have had”.
That way you also get cool alliteration.
Stay fresh,
Tyr
Post #966850
- Author
- Tyrphanax
- Parent topic
- Yoda and Palpatine NEVER should have been given lightsabers.
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/966850/action/topic#966850
- Date created
- 9-Jul-2016, 6:58 PM