Three stars.
Maybe two and a half.
I hate to be guilty of asking too much, but what was wrong with it for you? I’ve edited the story with what are hopefully-but-probably-not improvements.
Post #966019
- Author
- BillionaireHobo287
- Parent topic
- BillionaireHobo Sequel Trilogy and more
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/966019/action/topic#966019
- Date created
- 8-Jul-2016, 11:04 AM