This is undoubtedly off topic for this thread. This is a sort of wish list, not a script rewriting club. Go to the appropriate place for that.
Where the fuck is that stated in the OP? That’s right! NOWHERE! You don’t have to follow the OP’s example, you follower.
EDIT: Sorry for lashing out, but what were people expecting? This is a thread for fanfiction, so people are obviously going to get notified a lot when a guy takes on the entire Episode 8/9 story, and refusing feedback only makes things worse.