Shouldn’t this be on the Script Writing and Re-Writing board?
It will be when somebody gives positive feedback.
EDIT: Here’s the script of the first scene if anybody wants to give it a rewrite or dialouge: http://pastebin.com/kA9Ty9E0
Shouldn’t this be on the Script Writing and Re-Writing board?
It will be when somebody gives positive feedback.
EDIT: Here’s the script of the first scene if anybody wants to give it a rewrite or dialouge: http://pastebin.com/kA9Ty9E0