Why can’t Kylo just be evil? lol
Also you should stick with your original act one and then write it from there.
The brainwashing aspect is very logical considering the way he acts and was designed (similar to religious crusader knights)
Ok, I’m kind of confused. Do you mean brainwashed as in convinced to be apart of something to the point of having little to no free will? Or do you mean brainwashed as in mind control?