I’d remove the downed AT-AT getting blown up since “That armor’s too strong for blasters!”
I like what Ady has done to it- with the lasers hitting the more obviously damaged neck, but I’d rather see that shot replaced by Snowtroopers repelling out of the AT-AT and running towards the Rebel trenches.
This way when we cut to the Rebel soldiers and “C’mon!” they have a reason to be heading out onto the battlefield. As it stands, it seems like the Rebel troops are running out into danger for no reason at all.