Seems nice. If I get it right you’re just moving a few things around, especially the death star 3.0 subplot, but nothing else (fan service, cgi monsters, weird dialogues), aren’t you ?
edit: you’ve already answered !
Hal 9000 said:
This is not a Hal9000 endeavor, per se, but a collaboration on a core editing idea that could be an edit all on its own, and be incorporated into others’ more extensive TFA fan edits.