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Post #95582

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Han Solo VS Indiana Jones
Parent topic
Empire Of Dreams 2
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Date created
6-Mar-2005, 12:06 PM
Neat idea, Han Solo dying slowly from ill-side effects of the carbon freezing.

Change this one line that kind of bugs me.

HAN: "Who're you?"
LEIA: "Someone who loves you."

Change that to

LEIA: "Take a guess, flyboy."

Or something like that.