Originally posted by: sean wookie
Better?
Better?
A little bit, but still confusing. Let's try to decipher it.
"I hate the KKK." - OK, so do I.
"There was a protest at my school today..." - OK, a protest...
"...and about a picture of the KKK the students sat in." - About a picture of the KKK the students sat in? Ok, let me try to understand this one... There was a protest about a picture of KKK members? The students sat in the picture? They protested by doing a sit-in? Could you refrase that?
"I wasn't in it the people in it got suspended,..." - You wasn't part of the people who got suspended. Is that it? A better way to write this would be "I wasn't part of the people who got into this, they were suspended."
"but at least they got on the news." - OK I got that one.