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Mark's Down On Your Syntax
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10-Jun-2016, 11:31 AM

Jackpumpkinhead said:

Mark’s Down On Your Syntax said:

It looks pretty good, Hans, but I don’t think the bottom five and a half lines are meant to be there. Also, the stars seem a bit too big and the original has always had a bit of a blue tint to it. Almost there though.

please tell me this is serious

Warbler said:
Sigh