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Post #949575

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LuckyGungan2001
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What do you want to happen in the the rest of the ST?
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Date created
6-Jun-2016, 4:38 AM

BillionaireHobo287 said:

Linas Ren walks up the steps and to Ben.

Also, while your script has some good parts, the villains are protrayed as squabling idiots, not at all threatening, and the dialogue is kind of lame, it also seems rushed, and a lot of it is filler.