Finally got around to watching this. Most of the editing was seamless save for a few audio transitions being a little too loud. I watched a lower quality version so I can’t comment on how good it really was.

Problems:
-Han and Chewie are planting bombs in the base even though their only intention is a rescue mission.
-It’s never (properly) explained that Kylo Ren is Han’s son with the Snoke scenes missing. I suggest making that a reveal and have them not mention it but keep the sad look on Han’s face when he sees Kylo. Cut it all out until Han’s death scene.
-A few scenes don’t flow very well to each other (suggestions to fix this below)

Suggestions:
-Rather than cutting to Kylo Ren when poisonous gas starts coming out of the floor grates, let that scene play out and finish. Once that scene’s done, cut to Kylo Ren getting the news of their departure and then cut back to the falcon in hyperspace.
-Cut down Maz’s weird lines (“Where’s my boyfriend/I like that Wookiee” and The eyes monologue with her crawling on the table)
-Use a the special effects done in this video to make the scene play out more coherently.

Overall it was pretty good, your ambition pays off.