Thanks for the compliment Jack!

Yours is terrific as well. I wasn’t expecting anyone to do the fx so quickly! You probably should wait until you hear from Hal, but do you mind if I give my opinion?

I know that the TIEs and transports are flying overheard when Rey sees them, but I imagine that they flew low and are heading toward Maz’s castle, since Rey has ran a distance away from it herself. So by having then fly the same way over Maz’s head, it doesn’t seem like they’re flying toward the castle.

My suggestion would be to have them instead flying downwards from out of the Star Destroyer (which also looks perfect btw). In this scenario they would be much smaller, like a swarm of specs flying out of the Star Destroyer toward them. Also, them being farther away would explain why the patrons aren’t running for their lives just yet.

But yeah, I’d wait for Hal’s and few other opinions but that would be my suggestion. Either way though it looks great to me! A lot better than what I could do!