RogueLeader said:
Luke Skywalker has vanished. Without the Jedi, the mysterious FIRST ORDER has risen from the ashes of the Empire and will not rest until Skywalker has been destroyed.
Failing to convince the New Republic of the looming threat, General Leia Organa hastens to form a RESISTANCE as the First Order prepares their secret weapon, the STARKILLER.
Desperate for her brother’s help, Leia has sent her bravest pilot to Jakku to learn the location of the last Jedi while dark forces gather far above…
First paragraph: 28
Second: 28
Third: 27
Total: 83
I love this!! I have been trying to figure out exactly how to go about writing a crawl so thanks for that. with that being said this is my go at it using your structure and even some of the same working. i kind of used your proposed crawl as a framework for my own. lemme know what you all think:
Luke Skywalker has vanished. In his absence the sinister FIRST ORDER has risen from the ashes of the Empire and have vowed to take control of the galaxy.
Failing to convince the New Republic of this looming threat, General Leia Organa has formed a brave RESISTANCE to stand against the First Order and the powerful Starkiller weapon.
Desperate for help, General Organa has sent her bravest pilot to Jakku to learn the location of the last Jedi, while dark forces gather far above…
First Paragraph: 28 words
Second Paragraph: 29 words
Third Paragraph: 26 words
Total: 83 words