Could be as simple as starting the third paragraph with meanwhile.
Very nice crawls by the way. I appreciate the thought put into keeping it consistent in tone and style. Have you considered making new PT crawls?
Post #942872
- Author
- DominicCobb
- Parent topic
- The Force Awakens : Fan Edit Ideas
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/942872/action/topic#942872
- Date created
- 16-May-2016, 1:08 PM