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Post #940929

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RogueLeader
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The Force Awakens : Fan Edit Ideas
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Date created
10-May-2016, 10:43 PM

Or after Finn says that his friend was taken prisoner, you could just cut to Leia saying, “And I’ll do everything I can to help, but first you need to tell us all you know.” Yeah you lose a few lines but it’s worth it in order to bypass that jarring cut. And the lines lost are not really necessary, the scene still works either way. But I would only try this if the first one me and Smithers thought about still feels noticeably jarring.