The mockup was super quick and dirty, for sure. The point is that I don’t think it feels right to cut the shot of Finn running up to Han in two. If Finn could be made to say “it’s,” maybe the audience will think he’s basically saying, “Now they’ve really done it.” And ideally there’d be toned down music that isn’t so dramatic, perhaps looped music from Rey’s scene we cut away from, or maybe just a quieter version of what’s already there.
Post #939663
- Author
- Hal 9000
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- The Force Awakens : Fan Edit Ideas
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/939663/action/topic#939663
- Date created
- 7-May-2016, 7:58 AM