I would also maybe try to do the following in line with your plot restructuring:
-Cut together a star being sucked up with Hux’s speech. I overlayed it with the last section of “Anakins Dark Deeds”. If you want a preview clip, I can upload that. Basically Hux now prepares a speech for the star being sucked up. This is cut together pretty well.
This was the same way that ‘Noodle_Finger’ recut his version, and it indeed works well for anyone that wishes to place the ‘superweapn destroying the planets’ scene after Han’s death - he basically ended the ‘Hux speech’ with the shot of all the First Order troopers raising their arms.