The crawl looks great. I thought I would just point out a minor detail. (I could not find anyone else mentioning it in this thread.) For the pan down, the star field is moved with a nodal pan, meaning the camera stays in one place and just tilts while looking at a flat surface, while the planet and moons seem to be aligned to the overall movement of the shot. This causes the stars to move in a warped path in relation to the planets. A bit more information on this can be found in the Legacy Edition archive website.