Jeebus said:
In the dinner scene, I think you should really find a way to cut “I don’t want to you to race it’s awful I die every time you do it,” because that line is Tommy Wiseau levels of bad.

I like to keep the emphasis on “Watto makes you” because in my edit you’ll want to sympathise for Anakin, he’s forced into supporting his mother

I don’t know how I feel about the montage of the clone army. I feel like when you start showing the clones, you shouldn’t cut back to the senate. If it’s necessary to make the timing work, I think you should at least put clapping audio when you cut to those 2 Vurk.

I’ll try clapping sounds and the music is also too loud in that scene. I like to show the Senate approving Palpatine’s decision