I think the lava duel is great. I was expecting the final lines to include, “There is something I should tell you…” backflips away “I have the high ground.”
Hmm, I can’t decide if I like that better or not. What do you guys think?
I like it
Post #927398
- Author
- Smithers
- Parent topic
- Episode III: Revenge of the Ridiculousness
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- Date created
- 11-Apr-2016, 10:45 AM