I like the idea of your edit and would like to see a more detailed list of what you’ll be doing but the timestamp on the deleted scenes sucks you straight out of the film. And imo the scene is not good enough for such a drawback.
I highly recommend you don’t use the scene for the sake of the time code. My rule is pretty much that if a first time viewer sees a fan edit of the original source, if a certain edit or addition takes even a first time viewer out of the film then it doesn’t belong