Working on v2 of my alternate crawl for “The Phantom Menace” and I did a complete reworking of the paragraphs:

Episode I

THE PHANTOM MENACE

The galaxy is in turmoil.
Generations of peace and
justice have been disrupted
by corruption and greed.

For intentions that are
currently unknown, the Trade
Federation has formed a
blockade of starships around
the small planet of Naboo.

Two Jedi Knights, the
guardians of the Galactic
Republic, have been secretly
dispatched to the blockade
to settle the dispute before the
conflict would end in a war…

My intention is to make the structure similar to that of “A New Hope.”