There’s some dialogue throughout the film regarding Kylo Ren that I think would be wise to cut. Particularly when he’s talking to Lor San Tekka.

“Look how old you’ve become”

“Something far worse has happened to you”

“You know what I’ve come for”

That’s all well and good, but his responses after that are kinda cringeworthy, in my opinion.

“I know where you come from, before you called yourself Kylo Ren”

“The First Order rose from the Dark Side, you did not”

“You can not deny the truth that is your family”

It all seems like clunky exposition to me.

I’d also trim when Snoke says “the droid we seek is on the Millenium Falcon, in the hands of your father… Han Solo”. I’d cut it right after he says “your father”, the Han Solo part seems clunky.