I think the scene works best with no voiceovers whatsoever, the audience should know what Anakin is thinking about, and if they don’t then the movie has failed to achieve it’s goals.
On another note I thought I’d just post some of my rough and/or experimental clips:
-Anakin deeper voice: (https://vimeo.com/159893770)
-My radical TPM opening sequence: (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1sU3kLGa7RI) (https://vimeo.com/159310065)
-Rough Podrace: (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oHtmoDmIAus)
-Rough Qui-Gon death rescore: (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kJhBKvYT_4o)
Really loving that use of ESB music for the TPM opening.