I really like the idea of opening the film with the escape from Naboo, as you illustrate with your video, but I feel like it cuts too much action from the film. For example, with your version of events there is no place for the Jedi attempting to cut through the Federation Ship, which is one of my favorite uses of the lightsaber and a good introduction to the Jedi as warriors.
Actually I do keep the Federation Ship scene in the third act, it’s a dispute to cancel the invasion and hand over the queen rather than just a trade dispute.