Great work with the dub’s and the color correction. I really like what I’m seeing.
However, I found the siren in the in the scene very distracting. Maybe if you used a siren similar to the one used in A New Hope would work better. Just a suggestion…
I’ll probably quiet the siren a bit in the final mix, but I like the siren too much not to use it. The one used in New Hope was an Empire siren, so I wanted to use a different siren for the Federation, so it’s not just more of the same thing.