I liked the added scene between HX-81 and Darelda, I wonder who will be the person who can help her to unite the Senate, Bail or Palpatine. Ben and others have reached the planetary battle and they plan to engage Phakerem’s ship, meanwhile Carima is approaching to rescue Anakin.
Good job, and I look forward to the next part.
Post #918929
- Author
- JHodges
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- CWBorne’s Prequel Treatment Omnibus Thread (Current Work: Revisions & Edits)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/918929/action/topic#918929
- Date created
- 20-Mar-2016, 7:51 AM