I see that you never had a go at this one… Now I am not saying this is 100% correct but it does get rid of the bad music cut… Only to move the gap to another part of the film.
Lukes Rescue / Hyperspace
I am not going to bother breaking it down because it might be a bit wrong, but I do think there are some very right things about it too, anyway enjoy it for what it is worth… It’s a good attempt slightly rough, with a little uncertainty.
UPDATE
Ok the video file has been replaced… The bit that I think that now has a correct cue is from the point Leia says “Lando?”… Everything else I have done my best and not going to say it’s totally correct but I feeling my way through it…The cue is early in the original film and the special editions for the Facon flying way.
When Lando says “look there is somone up there” the music fades. The Gap in the footage is now rightfully in the middle. This is where Lando pulled Luke across the Falcon. Leia says “Hurry we have company”. Lando does not respond 5 seconds or about that.
The alternative is “Hurry we have Company” shot of dashboard with voice over and then a shot of the Tie Fighters approaching the Falcon is fairly far in the distance. or a shot of a Tie Fighter Pilot or POV out the cockpit. God knows.
The first part of the deleted scene needs a bit more time added. Mistake there admitedly but it’s about 1.5 seconds extra on the first scene of Leia using the medical tool.
The other cool thing is the original hatches open / c;ose in time to the music. I think this one is more or less in the bag.