Thanks for your input! I’m still trying to cut a better version of the scene, the musical timing is all good but you’re right, Obi-Wan needs to show some emotion.
I love the musical rescoring! I definitely agree with Darth GL that Obi-Wan needs a “Nooooo!!”, but I’m sure that extracting it isn’t too hard using something like Audacity, at least to be used underneath a music track. I’m definitely leaning towards using something like this is my edit
I wouldn’t even need to extract it because starwars.com has a very useful soundboard which contains Obi-Wan’s “NOO00!” by itself with no other audio, I’ll try it out but it may not end up in the edit anyway